... Wow... lol! how funny! Throwing syaoran house.

One thing, i sorta found it confusing between reality and syaoran reading the book.

If you plan to write more chapters then i suggest that maybe you could put the 'Book Parts' in Italic and the reality in normal letters. Just my suggestion though.

KEEP WRITING! :)

I love your story, it's one of them stories you could have made into a 14 chapter story. I was just getting into it, then he stopped reading. So happy you posted another chapter.

Absolutely lovely! This is kind of funny and mushy at the same time.

Cute story and it's just like Sakura to kick him out in the rain XD Syaoran has such ad luck when the 'milk incident' happened :3 You should put more chapters to say the whole book, like how they actually got to the stage of being married, how Syaoran actually got on a date with her (they dated for a while right?) and how he proposed. There are so many wonderful gaps you can fill wiht sweet fluff :3 Also how did Sakura react when the book was published? When it was published were they together already or could the book be how she found out his feelings? I'm gonna put this on alert in hopes for more cuteness XD

hahahaha, nice, sakura is so mean!

Ack Can't add another review for chapter 2~
It's a really cute story, hope to see another chapter from this serie?

Loved it! Can you write some more chapters?? Please...I want to know more about them before they married :)

Aww! How sweet! Loved it :) It's one of the sweetest stories I've read.

Wha! I love this story! It will be great if you can write a serie of oneshots... CUTE story!

Odd...
But funny!:D
SxS!

Another great story! I love how she kicks him out! GO SAKURA! lol wonderful job! Hope this continues~!

THIS IS SO CUTE. I LOVE IT. I LIKED THE WAY THAT YOU WROTE IT.

Clever. There is no other word to describ the seer brillance that is your writing, but I'm sure you get that all the time. I find your work a artful allience of profound imagery that you heap upon your readers so geniously( Which I greatly thank you for)and a cunning, wicked wit that lff

awhahahahaha i love it is just so kawaii! please update soon

AW! That was so cute! My fav onehsot.