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Reviews for: Watching, Waiting
Oshun
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
Great short ficlet. I would disagree with you that a moment of joy constitutes fluff. (No more than unmitigated angst makes a story profound--a misconception I deplore in fanfic writers.)

Nothing about this piece is fluffy and the underlying theme is heavy with loss and foreshadowing.
Vana Tuivana
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
This is just sweet and simple and lovely. Absolutely beautiful. I especially love this line:

>>the dark-haired one said, what is this? and the fiery one answered, it is blood, it is blood, you’ll see it again
WhiteLadyOfTroy
2007-05-31 . chapter 1
I like it.

:P Silliness aside, this was amazing! Gah, I hate it how you always say "my writing sucks" or "I can never do anything" and then you go ahead and write something incredibly amazing that makes everything I write look like a piece of shit. *annoyed*

I swear, despite only having read The Silmarillion six times or so and not shipping anyone from there (hell, I hate Beren and Luthien!), I'm probably going to start shipping Fingon/Maedhros because I've been reading so much about them...

Keep up the good work!
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