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| gabyhyatt 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abusegood fic |
| Kerstin 2008-07-07 ch 16, anon. | abuseAnother kiss! How romantic. It is refreshing to see that neither India nor Grey play games and that they are honest with each other. Keep up the god work! |
| Joyce LaKee 2008-06-26 ch 16, | abuseA beautiful chapter, (of course), and I just love how they had their kiss and it was just so romantic--ek! You GOTTA upload again and soon! Happy writing. |
| Looks Far Woman 2008-06-22 ch 16, | abuseA tender moment between Grey and India. This is good. Keep it coming! |
| Tipper 2008-06-20 ch 16, anon. | abuseAnd so they finally kiss... so romantic, too. This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. Grey and India seem to making headway and I might add, I'm glad they are in HIS terrority and not Scarlett's, lol. Scarlett wouldn't want him of course, but she would try to take his attention just to spite India. Nicely done, can't wait for more. |
| Looks Far Woman 2008-06-18 ch 15, | abuseThis is a truly original story, because you're not just rehashing Scarlett/Rhett. I love to see secondary characters fleshed out in fan fiction, and only a few stories around here do that. You show a very plausible "other side" to India's POV. I hope you write more soon. |
| Tipperose 2008-06-14 ch 15, | abuseBeautiful chapter! I do love Mrs. McAllister, lol. She's such a genteel southern lady with the traditional steel backbone. No fuss, no muss but sweet as corn syrup. The whole chapter flowed so nicely I was disappointed when it came to an end. Don't wait so long to update next time. I want to see what Grey says to India. This should be interesting. |
| Joyce LaKee 2008-06-13 ch 15, | abuseI like your portrayal of India as spirited. And I'm glad she has a friend in Mrs. McAllister--and that Mrs. McAllister isn't afraid to get in the middle! Can't wait for more. Happy writing! |
| Kerstin 2008-03-13 ch 14, anon. | abuseAh, finally an update for the India-story. I agree with the other poster here who said it is time for another India/Grey-kiss. But so far it doesn't seem we are getting an India/Grey schmoozing scene because jealousy looms ahead... I really love the stories about secondary characters here on fan fic. So unusual. Keep up the good work. |
| Joyce LaKee 2008-03-09 ch 14, | abuseIt always makes my day to see a chappie from you. And of course, this was really a good read. I like your OC's. You write them very well. Hope you upload soon! Happy writing. |
| Frenchtosser 2008-03-09 ch 14, | abuseOh this is too cute. I love fanfics that aren't mainstream. I admit, I never like India, but you have managed to make me reevaluate my feelings about her. Nice work, keep it up, I want to see a Grey/India kiss. :) |
| Scottish Chick 2008-03-06 ch 13, anon. | abuseThis is a really great story. You wouldn't usually think of India as such a character. I hope you keep updating it's really great. |
| Joyce LaKee 2008-03-04 ch 13, | abuseSo glad you updated. See? A little pressure never hurt anybody LOL! India is growing up and changing and it's so nice to see some man paying attention to her for a change and not that Scarlett. Not to mention he knows exactly how to make her lighten up. And besides, it's high time for her to let Charlie go... Happy writing |
| Tipper 2008-03-03 ch 13, anon. | abuseWonderful chapter! I really, really liked this chapter. It was great to watch India's reaction to Grey and of course, his to her. He's fascinated which is a good thing, imo, lol. I'm glad to see you posting again. Great job!! |
| Diary 2008-01-13 ch 12, | abuseSo far, I'm enjoying this. |