awww, so sweet :) I love the ending, the gentle cascade of words that just flow after eachother. Using Sakura's thoughts for repetition, i.e. 'why is the grass so green? how?' is clever :) There was just one thing that bugged me whilst reading it. I prefer when authors write the character names in the Japanese version, since it is more commonly used, i.e. Madison Tomoyo. But i think that varied for you since you watched a english translated version of it? Otherwise, you may have known that Syaoran is Li's first name in the series :)

Overall, very nice read. Keep it up.

that's so deep and emo! luv it!

OH MY GOSH! lol...dammit, this fanfic is soo cool, especially since it's Card Captor Sakura! ::mumbles:: i can't even write any fanfiction out of the RE section anymore...i'm definately bad at writing any other fanfiction except RE ones *tear tear*

...good, but I think you might have exazegerated the emotions a tad, for, if I rembercorrectly there are supposed to be junior high students, and their emotions woulden't be so developed. All in all a good read, but I just don't agree with the passion and desperation you portray these characters as feeling.

And yes, sadly more than I would like.

So good!

beautiful

I tried to review earlier but it won't show my text. So here goes again... I can't really say in words what I want to about this fic... it feels like someone's tied a beautiful silken cord around my heart-and has started yanking. The description is wonderful, the emotions are sincere...it feels less like a work of fiction and more like the testimony of a lovesick best friend pouring thier heart out to the reader. Nothing seems constructed-the whole story flows beautifully, and as always, your use of similies and metaphors is creative at the same time as being perfectly appropriate. And I know that you believe I think too highly of you, Serena, but you're wrong. You are an extremely skilled writer. Keep up the good work.

speechless...I think this is my fave, wait second fave. This was an awesome story...depressin thou, but that's how great of a writer u are...luvz, me

madison is mean what's up with that! but still good i like!

This story is really, really beautiful. Fabulous writing. Keep the great work up!

Beautiful, an emotional rollercoaster

oh that is sooo sad! write more. Please write more!

To answer your question...All the time. That was a good story about ss. It really tells just how much they love each other! _

I can relate to that! Congrats, you got a very good piece there, very well written. I like the way you described the world around Sakura and made her feel like an outsider. Keep up with the great work! Ja ne! .

After reading a sucide fan fic I thought my day was ruined but your poem brightned up my day and I happy to say you cheered me up with your wonderful believable story line. Domo Arigato. -NinaDBZ