Aww...this was soo sad! But vert well written. The plight of Lucrecia and Sephiroth has always fascinated me. You captured her very well.

good story! I feel so bad for her. :(

That's interesting. I know that I'm missing a bit (though I can figure it out), since I haven't gone to Lucretia's cave, but I get the basic point. In a way, and I know this is completely beside the point, it makes you feel sorry for Vincent. There he is, seeing the person he loved, and she only cares about Sephiroth. It's a sad story.

-lamia

Very poignant. A good take on describing Lucrecia's thoughts towards her son.

Pretty good. :) Nice description, sounds heartfelt.

Beautiful. Simple, heartfelt, and beautiful. I like it.

I write first-person perspective oneshots like this regularly, but I tend to stick with Sephiroth, Jenova, and the more glamorous enigmas. Lucrecia has never really been one of my favorite characters, but I can sympathize with her. Honestly, though, I never thought anyone would have the guts to write from her POV. I must bow to thee, for thy courage.

Excellent fic.
-Queen

Lucrecia is so heartfelt and real. This is definately a story for the favorites list. :-)