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| brolly501 2008-10-05 ch 9,  | abusefunny story...well i think somewhere in it it became more of a funny story and lost some of its plot...i like the overall idea of it though |
| Kaishi no Kokuei 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuseWell...right now I'm really liking the name Rebellion as Ranma's villain name...well it seems fitting considering he's going against almost everything he was before...and also since he's a like the embodiment of chaos...and rebellion means to go against order...so yeah... So Rebellion is my vote... ...also please update soon... --Kaishi no Kokuei |
| hentai18ancilla 2008-04-13 ch 9, | abuseI love the fact that Ranma hit Akane! -Before you think bad of meit is not because I condone female abuse and such the like btu because she is such a BITCH! Me, a female feminist who is usually a pacifist and dislikes violence, utterly agree and condone the beating of AKane. Heck she needs it! Nabiki though needs to learn that she is no longer the smartest one. Maybe Kasumi can join and do mangement, she's smart but ncie kind of like a secretary. |
| Anime-Freak317 2008-04-10 ch 9, | abuseOkay, good chapter. Though now the NWC is going to be all over Ranma within two days...or is that hours? I had a feeling that you were going to use Hitomi as the Cook. Certainly took long enough for it. Is she going to have an assistant? Maybe...Kasumi? Names for 'R'. Hm...Maybe 'Rogain'?, (laugh: it's that funny) Revamp, Reko Minxs (think Neko, replace the N with an R), Reiki. Anyways, lookin' forward to your next chapter. |
| Lerris 2008-04-09 ch 4, | abuseThe problem is that I see no resemblance to Ranma anymore. I could buy him becoming a 'villain' if, perhaps, he was able to do it with style and with largely not hurting anyone, but not this kind of thing.. |
| Darchias 2008-04-08 ch 9, | abuseI'm liking... Miasma. That's a good name. Untouchable, permeating, dark... That's a good name. |
| keichan2 2008-04-08 ch 9, | abuseFor anyone that have seen him eating, BlackHole seems fitting... Joke aside, I agree with Ranma, it is not quite "cool"... That, and given it have nothing to do with his powers, it could hint to others to who he is (see previous sentence) Personally, I'd suggest "The Dark Lord" (OK! I'm reading HP fanfics, currently...), until we know what are his powers... (and what is in him...) Please update soon! |
| ranma hibiki 2008-04-07 ch 9, | abusean this is how villains get their code names xD |
| windfire72 2008-04-07 ch 9, | abuseGood chapter pal! What is the irony, Akane is responsible for send one the best cooks in Japan to serve under Ranma (and to a criminal society it secretes by the way)cool! Now then how sounds "Lord Anansi" o "Lord Ananasi" like code name for Ranma, since the whole organization has reference to the spiders, I believe that it fits well. Here this the link to wikipedia that explains for what I consider it appropriate. http://en./wiki/Anansi |
| Dumbledork 2008-04-06 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter. What did Ranma do with Akane? Did he drop her after meeting Hitomi or take her to the base? |
| hellhound-d.o.w. 2008-04-06 ch 9, | abuseDark Chaos = Kuro Ranmyaku I personally thing that sounds like a cool villian name. Good evil Ranma story so far, can't wait to see more. |
| Hidden in Blood and Shadows 2008-04-06 ch 9, anon. | abuseI congratulate you on a well written story. I find it quite pleasing to read, and I feel somewhat safe in my assumption that I will keep reading this whenever you find yourself done with another chapter. My idea for a villan-name for Ranma would be... Devourer. It would fit with how he can eat, and also apparently with what he will become, if I've understood some hints right. That, and I personally think it sounds rather cool. Keep up the good work. |
| The Trickster Prince 2008-04-06 ch 9, | abusehow about Void |
| Silverscale 2008-04-06 ch 9, | abuseLots of suggestions, pick the one you like the most. The Wraith Decay The Ghast Akuma (Devil) Oni no Kage (Demon of Shadows) The Fallen Dark Mass Destruction Warlord Overlord Voidwalker Grand Shade/Void/Shadow Warlock Dark Core Nevermorw The Grim Reaper Reaper Spectral Knight The Dark Crusader Dark Hand The Living Corpse Retribution Tainted Avenger (Some random names suggested by a friend who enjoys games) The Witcher Dungeon Master Dungeon Keeper Guild Master Neverwinter |
| spedclass 2008-04-06 ch 9, | abuseAwesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |