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Sayuri-Ai-Shiteru-Itsumo-Haji
2008-08-20 . chapter 21
your friend is referring to eps 30, also that is a highly embellished version of the truth. it was vietnam, saya was running around killing people, karl was already in chiro from so no he did not have any cloths on, he tackled saya and held her down in a visual that was a very clear path to rape, he did not kiss her and Haji saver her from death, saya cut off karls arm and he ran away.
OathkeeperRoxasXNamine09
2008-01-16 . chapter 34
This was a ok story, and it's to bad Diva and Matthew were not there to See Saya kill Carl.
shareece
2007-09-19 . chapter 34
OMG That was one of the best sequels i have ever read it had heartache, love, lust, desrie,hatetread and lost more it was just plain out good

ps. maybe u should write another sequel plz
Lord OF Illusion
2007-07-29 . chapter 1
very different

but also confusing in the manner it is written in

Is it suppose to be a story or a poem

If it was a poem then maybe you could get away with how it is written in a strange first person perspective

Kinda cool
Sesshomaru's only Lover
2007-07-19 . chapter 32
This is the best Blood+ Fanfic ever Plz Make More I beg Of You
Sesshomaru's only Lover
2007-07-19 . chapter 34
NEED MORE! NOW! OMG OMG!! i loved it so much
kunoichikeiko13
2007-07-03 . chapter 33
This story is so KAWAII!! ^_^ I can't wait for the sequel, and wowzers!, love the drama in chapter 32. It's kinda sad though, if only Saya and Carl could live happily together without all the crap getting between them. (I'm not talking about what happened in your story, just the anime. 'Cause your story ROCKED!!) ^_^ Tell me wwhen you make the sequel because I forget things (even important things such as this) very easily, and I don't want to miss out. Let me be the first to know!
-Keiko
JimenasSins
2007-06-28 . chapter 34
EEP! Im so exicited that you are going to make another one!! I know Ive never commented before but I read this story (up to ch. 8) before I read 'Immortal'... Then I went back and read that, and by the time I was done with it, 'I feel Mortal' was up to chapter 28. So today I finished it!! I'm so happy Saya and Hagi are going to have a baby! But then again I actually was sad when Carl died... I SOO cant wait till you start the next story, I hope you have fun writing it!!
Much love and luck, JimenasSins (Ana) =)
Battygirl
2007-06-27 . chapter 34
Damn! No sequel? Ah well...DUDE! Very powerful ending! I loved it, yet hated that Carl had to die...I liked Carl...ah well...Oh no! Now I only have 'Vampire of the Opera' to wait for in Kansas! It's okay Scammy, you'll make it through that hell hole...Sorry...had to reassure myself. Anywho, I loved the ending!! I can't wait for more updates on 'Vampire of the Opera'...one of which I'm going to go read right now!
Fly Away 2003
2007-06-27 . chapter 34
well, that was interesting... Kai seemed very... humorous...i laughed at the awkward moment in the last chapter! great story...(hate you for just leaving it at that and not writing another!)
Aldalena
2007-06-27 . chapter 34
Yay, Saya IS pregnant!! ^^
Kai, you could've waited a little bit for someone to answer before you went barging in. XD
It's too bad you aren't writing ANOTHER sequel...heheh, that's okay though. Great story! ^_^
Aldalena
2007-06-27 . chapter 33
W00T!! Finally!! XD ...I don't know what else to say. >.< But yay, maybe Saya will be pregnant now!! ^^
JxFxM
2007-06-27 . chapter 34
Aw...That was so sweet...
Battygirl
2007-06-26 . chapter 30
Nice dude!! I'm likin' the updates!! Nope, scratch that; I'm LOVIN' the updates! You're doing an awesome job and I really can't wait to read more...however...on the tenth...and for about a week...I won't be R&Ring...I'll be in Kansas and...and...AWAY FROM A COMPUTER! GAHH! SUCH A HORRID NIGHTMARE!! But I'll take solace in knowing that you'll have updated this and 'Vampire of the Opera' a lot in that time and when I get back, I'll have all the Blood+ fanfics I can handle! wOOt! All that CarlXSaya, HajiXSaya, and SolomonXSaya goodness!!

Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait for the next update! ;)
Aldalena
2007-06-25 . chapter 30
Yay, two new chapters! ^_^
I just finished watching the Blood+ series today! Episode 50 made me cry...and smile...and fangirl at least four times! Haji is so sweet. ^_^ I love him!!
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