aw its beautiful! aw yuki and zero!

I really like this story, it's so sweet. The way that you kept both of them in character is very impressive.

THAT IS SO CUTE! is that like the scence of Zero and Yuki in the bathroom after that guy shows up and tries to kill Zero? I think this is AWESEOME! :)

kinda cute but real corny towards the ending. still like it tho.

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

write more please its really good

this is an amazing story! i luv it when the people in luv are the right ones!

AW! It's pretty short, but adorable

loved it...so cute...

Ah, their a kawii couple. I hope the end up together in the manga too! X3 I love Romance novels! And comedy as well, but none of the least. Vampire Knights is the best! I really like this story,. Great work!

i love it u should make it in to a story