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| 8yume 2008-05-27 ch 5, | abusei love this story please update please! |
| midnightsprite 2008-05-22 ch 5, | abuseEEK! Still the best ever! |
| moonchaser8 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseI gotta say this story is very good,I only have a couple of things to say... 1)QUIT WHINING ABOUT HOW SUCKY YOUR STORY IT IS BECAUSE IT'S NOT 2)YOUR GRAMMAR IS BETTER THAN MOST ADULT AMERICANS THAT IVE MET IN MY WHOLE LIFE. 3)OPEN YOUR BRAINSTORM AND START WRITING BECAUSE THIS NEEDS TO BE FINISHED! have a nice day ^0^ |
| avpke 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseSonsasu is a commanding,brave and smart girl. Yeah, just like my sister... WHAT DO YOU MEAN WHIT NOT CONTINUING!? HEY! I really love this story and your grammar doesn't suck.AND I love the characters too, there is no problem with them. You are one of the best! You don't dare to stop! Please, please, please, PLEASE, continue! |
| avpke 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseI must say, this story is one of my favourites. The story is so good! |
| avpke 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abuseOh my god! I laughed my ... off! |
| avpke 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseWow! Lots of humor and action. This is something! Now, what will happen? |
| avpke 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHey! This chapter is really good!I love it! |
| poetic love 2008-05-08 ch 5, | abuseYes i went here, yes i'd like this story to continue, there's barely any errors in this fic and i like it so far. sonsasu is in quite a situation. oh it's getting good |
| yukiemaru110 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseAAH! I had to go back and review this chapter... >.>; i have read your story so many times! >.< I love it! Please write more!! Grammar is fine! Please update! I'm a desperate fan-girl... |
| Bubbilicous Genius 2008-04-24 ch 5, | abuseNo Way! You Can't Quit! This is a freakin' Fantastic story! I love it!. How you made the characters act is perfect and the puns and funny comments are hilarious! You even have suspence and unexpectedness I really didn't see the sonsasu's best friend sleeping with her boyfriend...I wasn't even awake that sonsasu even had one. But there you go. BRILLIANT! *Claps hands then gets on knees and begs* please no quit on this wonderful fanfiction. Please keep up the good work. Your Friend, Bubbilicous Genius |
| yukiemaru110 2008-04-17 ch 5, | abuseROFLMFAO I love this story!! Grinning Fangs is so freaking hilarious! xD A pairing could happen. ;D Eh? Eh? Eh? Love Frozen. Second coolest of them all. Sonsasu's knife collection being the first :D Update! OMG! Update! Oh and... How old is Sonsasu? |
| Xenomorph977 2008-04-11 ch 5, | abusebeen awhile since there was an update |
| cat885 2008-04-06 ch 5, | abuseI really like this story. Your making this really good. But I like cranberry juice. Cant wait for next chapeter. Hope you update really really really soon. |
| vegetasfan14720 2008-04-05 ch 5, | abuseNo!! Don't delete this story Please!! I love it and can't wait for the next chapter, if you're going to do another one. Anyway great chapter, please continue. Ta ta. Vegetasfan |