“Now I understand! Johnny boy, I had no idea—and to think, I had been about to soil my essence by masquerading as that Jane Farrar I hear so many wonderful things about!”

-laughs head of-

Lol, "Johnny boy"! xD Loved it xD

Oh wow. I LOVE this fic. you are SUCH an awesome writer!

It's so weird. But so cool at the same time...

I'd like to see more of this (L)

I loved it. Beginning to end, I loved it. I thought everyone was totally in character and it was just all around adorable and hysterical! Great fic!

Lol. Wow. That was special and I need to email it to a friend. She'll love it...

I cannot accurately express how happy this made me...

It's nice seeing Nathaniel one up Bartimaeus from time to time...in a humorous light, not in a 'do this or you get sealed in a silver tin of rosemary for a century' sort of way I mean.

i liked it. the charaters were just like they are in the book, though i can't imagine Nathaniel being gay! interesting idea though.

Whoa. This is powerful. I love your writing style.

Marvelous! I loved this! I'm not going to add it to my favs, but put it under a bookmark so I can read it with easier access

hahahahahaha! i love it..which is surprisingly funny cus i am usually against slash fanfics but this one just cracked me up...KEEP WRITING!

Ya gotta love the NateXBarty!... xD... Seriously though nice job!

LOL. you capture the characters so perfectly, too!

Hey,

this is one nice story. I really like the pairing and I would like to read more, please!

byebye

I am speechless. I am completely in love with this fic. OMG ILU hard. WHY IS THERE NOT ANY MORE?

(Don't mind me, I'm just fangirling)

please god!

tell me you're going to write more?

two words; ADORE IT