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Reviews for: The Actions that Betray Our Meaning
Ophelia Linda
2008-11-06 . chapter 2
How come Al became a girl ? I still cannot get its meaning .
Ryumi13
2008-10-25 . chapter 2
I* love the story! When are you going to put another chapter or is this is?
YukinoKara
2008-06-06 . chapter 2
wow, really good story so far; keep writing ;)
fuyu-no-tsuki
2007-10-06 . chapter 2
That was my first gender switch fic and it was far less traumatizing then I thought it would be. ^^ It's good, I hope you continue it.
VadMustang
2007-06-02 . chapter 2
hey great story!! a VERY different edxal but a very good one nonetheless! im a little lost though, between chap one and two because chap 1 end with ed rejecting al and the second starts with them together and its a little confusing. i think you should add a little chap in between showing the transcition between the rejection and the acetation. but for the rest is very well writen and a very good plot!
Nithela
2007-05-30 . chapter 2
Oh.. this is such a lovely mpreg story ^^. Love the idea to start with, and Ed is going to be a responsible, loving father. Both of them are just wonderful, and I'm so going to put this on my alert list! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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