three cheers for brooding dark laurie! we all know what he must've been feeling--i, at least, was thinking similar despairing thoughts when jo turned him down, and it only got worse with the arrival of the professor...and now we get to read about it! YES!

Aww...so sad.

Hey. Dark Laurie is HOT!! Oh, how I wish LMA had written it differently. But then again, we might not have such beautiful fanfic as we have on here then, I suppose. That's one consolation. :D *tries to be happy* Beautiful, as usual, you managed to completely capture poor Laurie.

Del! 'Tis I, Sweets, here to review one of your Little Women stories! :)I don't quite know why I've never read any of these, because I really like the book (and the movie... with Christian you know it's gonna be good!)

Poor Laurie! I hate how he ends up with Amy... it just seems so... not right, ya know? Jo and Laurie are PERFECT for each other!! I really like how you have Laurie being so disrought over it all, because it's something that I could see happening. My favorite part was Laurie's perception of Jo's face whenever she looked at him. Very nice. :)

Fabulous job, as usual!! :D

p.s.- Where, oh where have you been?? :( I haven't heard from you (in the form of a new chapter or story) in so long! I hope everything is alright! I'm here if you need anything, ok?

I really like this story...I prefer Laurie when he gets over it, but dark Laurie does have his intreiuge still, no? ...I think I spelled that wrong...

I loved it. The descriptions were wonderful and the adjectives you used were perfectly placed. By the end you made me despise the professor, just as Laurie does. A very enjoyable story. Will there be a more parts?
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I really liked it! except maybe someone should explain why when Amy asked Laurie in the book if he would mind if Jo got married and he said no.

Quirky Del, you're back! *hug* I hope your trip went well.

Doesn't everyone love dark Laurie? He is so much fun to write...or at least to think about in my case. I've always wondered how Laurie acted during Jo's wedding. It's so sad that he goes into the kitchen to say bye to Jo but he really can't because Amy's there. Oh man I'm getting depressed. When will these kids get their act together??

That sounds a bit sadistic, but in a very lovey-dovey way! Great contrast! It really potrays the pain Laurie feels!

I love Laurie. Dark or not. But he deserves a better fate. Poor fellow. Amy, I ask you? So ridiculous. I never got her. Laurie and Jo were just destined to be together. She just couldn't see it. And the professor is too old for Jo...

Do write more Laurie/Jo fics where they get together! It would make this reviewer very, very happy!

omg i was this close to hyperventilating when i got the notice saying you'd posted another story.
and YAY it's another installment of stalker laurie! my very favourite kind of laurie i have to say.
so so so so damn friggin good this one, just the right responses from jo and the tunneling vision of laurie and the disgust he feels and gah so good.
it's wonderful to have you back :)
love love love