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Reviews For: Other World Guardian

Midnight Shard
2008-04-08
ch 2,
abuseUpdate soon!
shewolf51
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseIt's a good idea but it seems rushed and doesn't have enough detail. Though it's good overall
LadyJamie178
2008-01-08
ch 2,
abuseIt's Great so Far! Write more soon
SOLDIER-MS
2007-07-30
ch 2,
abuseGreat Update, I cant wait for the next chapter and to see Zack fight his first fiends and sinspawn
ReplicaRiku'sgirl
2007-07-23
ch 2,
abuseWow, fascinating... though you have minor spelling errors. Revise this chapter some of them like 'cheeks', and others I missed. Keep it up sensei!
ReplicaRiku'sgirl
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseWho are the two people that revived him? Was it Jecht and Auron?
Wasn't that dream taking place after everyone fought against Sin? Your story is great as ever!
IshtarPiccolo
2007-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery nice. By the way, the name of the Planet is Gaea. ^^
SOLDIER-MS
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseMy second favourite FF game with my second favourite FF character, I never thought i'd find one, I think you've made a great start and I hope you continue
annnie
2007-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseomg i want to know what happens next, its interesting that you choose thia couple and i like it please update soon =)
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