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| Midnight Shard 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseUpdate soon! |
| shewolf51 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good idea but it seems rushed and doesn't have enough detail. Though it's good overall |
| LadyJamie178 2008-01-08 ch 2, | abuseIt's Great so Far! Write more soon |
| SOLDIER-MS 2007-07-30 ch 2, | abuseGreat Update, I cant wait for the next chapter and to see Zack fight his first fiends and sinspawn |
| ReplicaRiku'sgirl 2007-07-23 ch 2, | abuseWow, fascinating... though you have minor spelling errors. Revise this chapter some of them like 'cheeks', and others I missed. Keep it up sensei! |
| ReplicaRiku'sgirl 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWho are the two people that revived him? Was it Jecht and Auron? Wasn't that dream taking place after everyone fought against Sin? Your story is great as ever! |
| IshtarPiccolo 2007-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. By the way, the name of the Planet is Gaea. ^^ |
| SOLDIER-MS 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseMy second favourite FF game with my second favourite FF character, I never thought i'd find one, I think you've made a great start and I hope you continue |
| annnie 2007-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg i want to know what happens next, its interesting that you choose thia couple and i like it please update soon =) |