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| pisceanchic101 2008-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseaw how sweet! |
| kenshinlover2002 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseIt was nice, you just need to re-read before posting to lessen your mistakes. Like where you wrote "Sasuke held her head" I think you meant hand. And later where you wrote "Sasuke looked over to Sasuke" I think you meant Hinata looked ... |
| DJ 2007-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHAT WAS A GOOD ONE GREAT JOB. |
| Danimals21 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseaw! so cute! i luved it! |
| yinasuka 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseOne word...CUTE! |