Ah... I hope you didn't give up on this story. It's just getting good!

Consider your ego stroked.

I am very interested to read what happens next, so please don't give up on this story!

Hooray?

I read it when you were typing it, so now I can flame this without any guilt! MWAHAHAHA!

FLAMFLAMFLAM FLAME FLAME OMG ROFL PONY FLAME FLAME

I think that this is an obvious Tetra X Eragon fic, it's quite obvious.

That means this is a crossover. My eyes.

Zelda speaks funny.

Lol, those Hylians/Hyrulians really suck. A lot.
And Verdin's so stupid. Like you. Your stopider then mee.
(And I have the right to say that, being your evil twin brother of death! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!)

Another good chapter.

"The original hope here was to show that there existed ‘good’ and ‘evil’ on both sides of the battle front, but I think this ended up casting the Hylians in a better light."

I think you did okay with that. The Hylians may not be perfect (as no one is), but they are, all things considered, supposed to be the good guys. So cheers.

I haven't been able to read the entire thing yet but I am very impressed with what I seen so far. I hope to see more of this story soon, keep up the good work.

And so the dark clown begins his reign of terror...
By killing a cow. How evil of him.

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The only thing I don't understand is this? I forget if this was explained already but if it was...then i'm sorry, but I just forgot! Does Link remember his adventure with Hyrule and Termina or is a decendant of Link? Just wondering, cause you never put in any references in there...(I don't think...)

Well, keep on updating! I'll come by occationally to leave a review!

Hm... I would've thought Hoogi would've already commented about cheese or something here.

Well, I didn't bother to read the 'New and Better' version because the older one was probably better.

Yeah, good story. Leik, update, or diez, or somethinz.

Well I liked this chapter as much if not more than the first. Keep up the great work!
Also I see no problem with Link at all.

But say, I'm wondering about a couple thing: why does the Malon like character get her own name (something I approve of) while her father sticks to Talon?
And judging from the archery range in OoT, shouldn't we assume Gerudo took great pride in their skills with a bow. Maybe it's something they'll pick from Hylians later on? Not that this is important really, but ya know...

Oh and I read your story and I didn’t hate it ;)

Yay for me already having read this.
Wow, like, teh worst way to end teh chaptar.
Lol, La-moo-moo-cow.
Rougii teh awesome, but Link pi.
Update or Talon falls on La-moo-moo-cow, ends world.s

TEH END?
Good chapter anyway.
Update soon. (Blah blah blah.)

Woah, that was quite a surprise!

I came in expecting the usual story that is prior to Oot but so close it's almost the same as OoT, but thankfully you've gone further back and while retaining some familiar elements (like the war we were told about in OoT) you are actually creating some excellent original content that fits in what the games gave us very well without being predictable.

I loved the writing style and the characters all seem full of potential.

There is only one thing I'd like to suggest: it seems odd for a king to have no qualms about his daughter, the princess, taking part in what is essentially a police roundup. I'd suggest addressing this in future chapters somehow to make that more plausible (like this could be one of those nasty kings who don't care at all about their female children or any other solution you may find).

I hope to read the continuation soon!

Uhm... It wasn't bad. Just a little lengthy.

But this looks like the makings of a great story! I hope to see more of this fanfic! Will you update it?

Even though I've already read this, yayness for title, as opposed to "The Significance of RED."
Salencia is mad. And crazy. And insane. And psycho.