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| Stellarsiren 2007-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseOne word...Wow. Oh, and had me tearing at end. |
| Patty 2007-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, I can say with all sincerity you certainly haven't lot your ability! The more I mull this over in my mind the better I like it. It's sad but it's possible. Just like a leak in a **, let the first trickle start and the whole thing soon follows. |
| thebondgirl 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abusewow... depressing as heck, but great as anything :P it's great to have ya back!:) |
| MaeLace 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseDang. That was amazing. And so utterly heartbreaking. Wow. |
| shaolingrrl 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseWow. Harsh? No need. I will say I had trouble parsing the last sentence of the first paragraph, and that is a very important sentence in a very important paragraph. |
| Shrimp 2007-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseOw. That was depressing. Well written, but insanely depressing. |