Amazing! I loved it!Write more...

Great job!! i knew you couldn't kill Micah!! Yay!!!

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I WANT ANOTHER ONE!!!!!! That was a great story with an awsome twist! I wish I had that talent! Good story and I want one more!

Noooooooo! :( Poor Micah! Jeremiah must die!

A-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What happened!!?? Gabe and Jeremiah!!??? A-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h!!!!! That's not right! No!!!!!!!!! I hope Jeremiah dies!! A horrible and fiery death!! Oh, poor Micah. He's been played like a deck of cards! =( Poor baby.

More, please. Loving this story!! You definitely have talent and you express it well. Hope you update soon, and I hope that Jeremiah gets what is coming to him. *evil smirk* I think that Micah and Gabe make an excellent couple. Again, please continue.

keep going! its really good! does the warm 7 up thing rerally work?? lol anyway, i still love MICAh , now and forever

Ack! Cliffhanger! Great sequel! Love the 'pretty boy' quips. *is now starting to hate Jeremy--I mean, Jeremiah, with a passion*

This is a really great story that you've got here! Though I'ld like to suggest something. Have you ever thought of having Micah be scared of the wheel chair? I mean after what he did to that poor old lady that was in a wheelchair! But anyways great story and I hope that you write more about, what seems to be everyone's fave guy, Micah.

I like so far......its good, again i wish that i had Micah instead of Gabe, but thats ok! im looking foreward to readin more!

Cool!! I'm the first to review!! I'm the first to review!! I loved it. Continue... Continue... CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!