This story is a very cool idea! I like it!

I like your Update, and the general flow of the story. I will be looking forward to the coming chapters.

-Lilith Kayden

Your story is light and entertaining. Most definitly you should continue it. Its a first chapter of a story,not a Oneshot that's complee in itself.

Lilith Kayden

I liked it :)

You should continue with this story, I think it'll be fun :)

Great job!

I like it please continue it!