I agree with your whole "its like squeezing water out of a rock" thing because there was no need to put Jacobs POV in, she just did it to make it longer!

i truly belive that SM is a BIT crazy! just a bit...lol right i mean she gave the movie rights for the twilight saga to summit entertainment! WHO? i personally absolutly hate the fact that she just got luck ONCE with twilight and then ppl just fell in LOVE with her and the books! i have nothing against twilight newmoon and parts of eclipse but BD NEEDS TO DIE! i was soo pissed at that book! jacob falls in love with a minutes old BABY! WTF!? then the none fight? and the 29ish dead end vampire characters that come to help fight but then bella the QUEEN!! just saves the friken day with her -big deep echoy voice from movies- 'MIND SHIELD' watever! -sigh- srry i got a little rant happy i love ur story BYE!

Good so far :)

I am insomniac, too. :)

Wow! Im adding these cool oneshots of yours to my favs so quickly...really enjoy your writing, excellent:)

OME! i LOVED IT! please PLEASE wright more

your 1# fan
-cheku

Was that the end of your story??

I dissagree. i dnt believe SM leaked it out herself.
i have the fisrt 12 chapters on the internet and i can still get into it

*laughs* That seems like the sort of thing Bella would do. Really, poor Edward. She's such a tease.

I really liked this, and I am now going to read a few of your other stories. Toodles!

Write More, Write More.

Your an awesome writer, I loved it.

Please Write More like this.

Pretty Please. :)

Two things:

No. 1. I like your story. It's fluffy and just racy enough to be past the "cuteness" boundary. I would very much like to see more one shots along this same line of thinking (I haven't taken a look at your other work yet, so forgive me if you've already posted similar material.)

No. 2. To the people who think you're crazy or whatever other insults for changing your mind: No she's not. NO SHE'S NOT and I'll be more than happy to explain why. When you form an opinion based on first impressions (which, to be frank, pretty much every one does 99% of the time) and refuse to change your opinion due to circumstances or emerging information, you're being closed minded. Seriously. Changing opinions means that you're growing as a person. Personally I don't particularly like the Twilight series - or at least the Bella/Edward pairing. Now, there are certainly characters that intrigue me, such as the Cullen brothers' individual histories and the way the family integrates into new locales. In my circle of friends Stephenie Meyer and Beraking Dawn in particular are nothing more than a big joke. And before any of you "flamers" ask- I'm not a kid. I'm really not. I'm 22, I'm a college graduate and am currently in grad school and prepping for the CPA exam. So, yeah. I know a bit about what I'm talking about. Insanity's Partner, I think you are dead on about Midnight Sun's leak and Meyer's reaction. If she's that upset about it I recommend a nice stiff drink and a nice long talk with her lawyer.

Sorry for my little rant there, but you guys are seriously making me upset. I'm fairly certain that the community won't iss any of YOU, either, if and when you leave the community. Insanity's Partner, I appluade your decision.

- O.

OMG
r u crazy!
U CANT JUST CHANGE UR OPINION OF THE BOOK JUST BECAUSE SHES WHINING
ITS NOT FAIR ON YOUR READERS IF YOU TURN YOUR BACK ON TWILIGHT
GOD!
GET SOME SENSE KNOCKED INTO YOU
other than that pretty good chapter
lol
^.^
good start though
lol

your right but please pleasy do nother chappie, for me at least and all of ur addoring fans!

do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more please!

Wow, if I were Bella, I'd so tease Edward too!
Nice idea!

i love your writing, and this fan fic was probably one of my favs, and while i do wish that you would continue your writing of twilight fanfiction i really do understand your descision. stephenie meyer made such a big deal out of midnight sun being put on the interent, and then put it on herself saying not read it. that made no sense and it really sucked, considering the fact that what i read of it was way better than anything in the dissappointing copy of breaking dawn that everyone was waiting for.
Any way if you change your mind at some point, please please upload more exb fanfction on here because you're awesome!

i respect ur point of view and stuff and luv the story too. Still I hope she publishes midnight sun I kind of agree-all the characters were off in breakign dawn but I still luv Stephanie Meyer, Twilght, and Edward lol; I don't really think she leaked it herself but it might not be a lie that she is holding it and all; plus she gave the manuscripts to close friends and family who probally betrayed her for money; it happens sometimes. Oh well everybody has thier own opion and maybe yours might be right-only time will tell though. Still if she wants to publish a book, she gets to publish a book-you don't have to like it or read it our anything. P.s I liked laughing at breakign dawn too... : )