great story must know what is in the bushes please write more.

george

AH! You can't just leave it at that! Nice story, I've never read a story *quite* like this one. It's caught my interest most definetly!

this story is really good! please update it. I really want to know what happens next...

aw, i hope you update soon :)

i really, really, really like your story! is there any chance of you updating/continuing with the story?

This is amazing. I am riveted. I can't wait to hear more.

Cliffie! AH! I need to know what happens next. Update! It's too good to let go of.

Oh boy, you gotta write more! This is a very good story so far

Oh man, that was so suspenseful! Please update soon!

No! a cliffie! please update soon!

The REAL Alice Cullen _

Great story!I loved the raw emotions of the characters. It brought tears to my eyes. Please continue. I can't wait to see what happens!

this is really good, sad but.

I hope you update it soon, i really want to know what happens next.

awesome job! its rlly sad tho

DUDE! start writing the next chapter and post it now! this was so good! i NEED to know what happens to bella and what the hell made edward say "Crap!" . Please start writing! i love all of your writing and i am curently on Bella's War. i loved Bella's Cross and Bell'a Crown. but i need more of that storm spunk!

Why are you so evil! Gosh, that ending is killer!

Let me say that you are an amazing writer. You actually had me crying in that first chapter. It was so emotional. I'm tearing up just thinking about it.

But now that I've *hopefully* flattered you, I can tell you how evil that ending for this chapter was! I mean, come on! Who would do that! I still love you and all, but SERIOUSLY!

*deep, frustrated breath* I don't know what I'm going to do until your next update! So, all I can do is hope that more is coming SOON! Until my next review!

Amoredward

P.S. I also love your beta work on Edward's Date Night Extravaganza. That's amazing! You just rock!