really? i hope u feel better soon please update soon!

I just read all of Lost Heaven parts one and two, and I have to say that it was addicting. I had to keep reading, and found myself in withdrawal now that I've gotten to the end of what you have written.

You do a great job of developing each character and their relationships with other people, although I have to say that I'd like to see more about the other Organization members eventually, if it fits in with your plans.

Please feel better, and do try to keep writing this awesome story!

I absolutely love this series. I started readin number one yesterday and finally got to number 2 today. Great job, I'm addicted. Cant wait for next chapter

Great chapter. I'm glad that Sora was finally able to talk with Riku.

Thank you for addressing the question that I had from Awakening here. I already miss Bojangles very much. D: Hopefully, wherever he is in fictionland, he's doing okay.

it is upsetting to know you wont be updating in a while but i can understand. . . If you remember i sent you a long review at the end of your first one. . . never trying to see if you updated i was left in the dark on this new story until i got bored on day and looked at all my old reviews. I dont mind if i cant review if this chapter gets made over again. I just wanted to say I know the feeling when everything doesnt matter due to depression. I hope things go well with you and i looke forward to reading the last to chapters ( i was going to print them out to read in class when i found your latest announcment) i will start looking at your journal. . . think and maybe pick up your novel if it is out ^_^ get well and once again i must commend you on an exsellent story ^-^

n_n thats ok, Lost heaven is a great series, I can wait XD

Hope that you feel better soon!

heya hunny, just wanted to say it's ok to take a break... with me anyway, you know i understand why... and i wish you weren't having so many problems, if i could i'd go over there and hug you til you were better ^^ anywhosers, can't wait to talk to you again... you know i live for our talks... oh! i got to see horton hears a who! IT'S SO GOOD! *jesse mccartney plays one of the voices!*
huggleglompsnuggle!

OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!
OMG I hope it's a AS,AS!
That would make a great chapter if Riku heard Sora saying sorry and then was all like WTF?

I cannot wait!

Also, is Maho one of your own charters or is she like from somewhere?

Hope to hear from you soon!
*huggles!*

Nice one! Loved It! Apart From..Some things
i thought that introducing the cat was great! it made me laugh when Sora was looking him for then all he heard was 'MEOW!'
haha that got me giggling.. i love Maho, she's so caring and so friendly XD better than Sora'z sarcastic bitch of a mother
^_^..So very G00D! Oh and It made me SO BLOODY Sad when Axel's memories went blank =| i was going INSANE X0
i hope that Riku's mother gets better soon! i see Sora helping her...hm ^_^ When Axel was like "get up your father wants to see you", when he was acting like an org member( although some of them,demyx!! XD, arent all like that nasty) I was like WOW I love how she done that!... then he made Riku feel worse than ever but Axel came and brushed Rikus cheek i was like aww wow thats so cool! you fooled me =] damn right! anyway some of the things i didnt like.
i didnt like Xemnas..but i guess no-one would, he is way to evil! i REALLY < (Sorry =[) did not like RoxasxSora.
It broke my heart to read those bits.. he cant betray Riku like that! and he wants it!?! how could that be!
I hope Riku kicks Roxas' butt! and then Axel and Riku like get them back..Kinda made me go off Roxas now LOL!
But don't worry i still love Sora =] i bet hes a good character to write about! Anyway thats my bit! When Will Part Three Be Up =[ Im DYING! Baii! x

. . . woah, i can't believe they did it. wat i wanna know is wat would riku and axel feel about it. *perverted thoughts here*

Omg! i am addicted to your stories! This one was so good that i'm staying up at 3:15 in the morning to read it! My favorite Chapeter was: Friends and Lovers! I cant wait to find out what happens next!! i give all your stories a 5/5!

OMG! i love all the pairings in this story! i cant wait for the next chapter and you have me as hooked as i was months ago! keep it goin!

hey. is this my first time review this story or not?

yeh, well, whatever. anyway. no, i didn't hate this roxassora thing. i'm a supporter of rikusora and akuroku, very, but this relations you made... simply right. i actually felt my heart beating in excitement. you know, they're just... felt right. ha.

anyway, i don't know what you'll do with riku, and i love angst so much, but... erm, will you make this happy or sad ending? or not both?

Hello.
I actually had mixed feelings about the last chapter.
I caught up on both the new ones just in time for the New year tomorrow! Then I'm all set to print at school. I loved the Riku chapter. To tell the truth I think it's nice that you're kepping up with it and all, it makes things easier to understand. Next the Sora Roxas chapter. Well I liked it and disliked it. Written well as always and the reason it had dislike towards it is because of the strong emotions it brings up. You did an excellent job at pulling the heart strings in it. I really like how Sora's decisions and thoughts at the end are true. Well for me anyways. I've been noticing lately that I've been more and more bitter, or rather discovering what had always been there and understanging it like that. It's true when someone hurts me, I want to hurt them but my own nature doesn't allow that. Guilt trip sometimes but outward hurt on purpose is a no. In all I think you did a very skilled job at catching human emotions.
Bravo!
I await your next chapter with baited breath!
~Missy

I believe that this chapter really made Maho a big character for me. I recognized her a enjoyed her pressence in the story but this is really the first time I saw her as her own person. Even though her emotional release was caused by Sora and Roxas, it still gave her dimension. That was an important event to take place before the two ran away.

More Sora and Roxas this chapter huh? I really am accpeting this because of the circumstances that they are in. You explain why the attraction is happening and I don't feel as if tehy are really betraying Riku and Axel. I wan't them to be able to return to their original lovers and not have to choose between. It would be sad and too hard to handle for them ecpecialy after what happened in their previous lives. I feel that I'm dwelling too much on this subject but it is a strong point currently for me. It has more reprocussions then most of the problems you dump on the boys. I want to know if Sora is going to tell Riku about this... developement. I not sure how that thought would go through. The deep apologie made at the end may help. You may not have planned for this so early but I think that it may have been a good place for this chapter to come in. It does flow well concidering the pressure throughout the story lately. Either way, I guess I will have to wait.

Though you won't do it, I really want some insight on Roxas's feelings right now. He is so confusing. He's still in riddles and it's tearing them both apart. THough I have to agree with Roxas about how well Sora listens to him. Tough for them both.

Riku and Axel's conflicts seem to be more intricate then Sora and Roxas's and I think it should be equal. When they run, something should change because so much more action is happening with Riku. I am really excited for the next Riku chapter for that reason. I always seem to be rooting for him. Tsk tsk, I think that I'm playing favourites.

Cool, your quote/lyric for this chapter was from the Dave Matthews Band. Not usually my style but a guilty pleasure of mine. :D Also, this doesn't even have to do with the story but you used one of my favourite not real words. "GIANORMOUS" It's right up their with "anywho" and "huzzah" (did you know the qord huzzah has it's own wikipedia article? 0.o)

Anywho (hehehe) happy holidays and have a good new years. Hope you computer shapes up! Cya