 Corrupt Innocence 2009-08-23 . chapter 4*squee* |
 kanarazu 2009-07-08 . chapter 10These are wonderful and each stands alone very well. I love how you write the two of them and you make each scenario seem plausible. Awesome work. |
 Cuvea 2008-05-04 . chapter 10This was just too cute ! Awh (; |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-07-04 . chapter 10Aw that was really sweet!! lovely! |
 Tikkuy 2007-06-27 . chapter 9Nice little stories here. I especially like 'At The Beginning' and 'As An Apology'. Keep writing. =) |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-18 . chapter 9Haha that was great! Love them all! xx |
 Ikonopeiston 2007-06-17 . chapter 9This one is a real joy. I found the flirting amusing and altogether realistic. Here you have them each a match for the other. The game with identities works to the advantage of the plot, as does the deftly handled background - noises, odours, etc. You are getting better at these morsels as you go along. Bravo! |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-10 . chapter 8Aw although that was hilarious! Mainly from Gippals comments, it was also realy sweet! Lovely x (Who've thougth you could desribe a fan fic about baralai and gip being lovely!? hehe turns out you can! ) x |
 Micayasha 2007-06-09 . chapter 2Oh my god.
... I think you should know, I love you. XD |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-08 . chapter 7O_O om my god how scary! hehe very different but still great!
Each of your idea's is so different but great in its own way! This one was funny though! x |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-08 . chapter 6I love these! This was so funny, its brilliant! I loved 'I didn’t realize you were a necrophiliac—“ hahaha great! xx |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-08 . chapter 5Aww that was really really sweet! So beautiful! x |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-08 . chapter 4hahah aw brilliatn! xx |
 DarkenedPetals 2007-06-08 . chapter 2Aw they kissed thats soo sweet! And so funny! hehe |
 Ikonopeiston 2007-06-05 . chapter 7"Priests came from all walks of life, Gippal had heard. He wondered where Baralai had walked before this." - What an excellent pair of sentences. Nicely phrased.
You are having a marvelous time with these variations and seem to have gotten past the one-sidedness you were concerning yourself about.
Leavening this one with the spice of danger and the hint of sexual pillage added greatly to the intensity of the scenario and the last sentence gave a neat little twist.
Delightful!! |