great job!

I loved reading this story. I'll have to read some of your other stories.

Aww! That was beautiful! I absolutely loved it!

WE young fics are so cute! Love your story...

Great first fic!

From a WE shipper

my dear, you just breached copywrite. that isn't good. you should most certainly disclaim it, or you might get into trouble! not to mention that perhaps you should post a spoiler warning for anyone who hasn't seen the third movie u kinda spoiled the ending...

and now that i will say that it tied in very nicely, and you've done a good job! just be careful with using what is essentially someone elses material and it will be perfect!

that was so - melodramatic. "will i ever see you again"? psh... of course they will. it was mildly OTT but all in good fun and very cute! nicely written too. have you been reading mills and boon by any chance? P

well you've certainly managed to make it very profound, considering they ARE only fourteen... nevertheless, very cute! xx

This is very sweet. Much more believable than some of the other Will/Elizabeth backstories I've read. *applause*

Really cute! I really like how you came up with the "prequel" to CotBP. That scene at the end of AWE was sad, but at least (with what that end of credits scene showed) they'll be together again ten years from then.

Great story!

nice!

Bravo! Excellent POTC story, you really should write more of them, I'd read them.

love it! these young WE stories are the best!

I loved this chapter! Best one yet!

Wow! Loved it. So much love and feeling through your words. Thank you for taking the time and posting this.

Aww. That was really cute. I liked it a lot. *sighs* If only Will didn't have to be captain, then Elizabeth would be happier...I think so anyways.

-Kirby