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androk1
2008-09-20
ch 15,
abuseI have a feeling "Lynwood" (go Auron!) is going to play a pretty important role here. (In Yuna's favor I hope) Please update as soon as you're able to. :)
Lilac Brodderick
2008-09-15
ch 15,
abuseOh. My. God. This story is pure...brilliance. You've captivated me like no other story has. And I'd be a complete liar to all other authors when I say this, but A Stir of Blood is honestly my favorite fanfiction. The twists and turns are leaving me in ungodly anticipation for Chapter 16. Especially now with Auron in the picture--I'm stoked. It's quite discouraging actually. After reading this I don't feel like any of my drafts are up to par.

I'm kidding, of course. There's nothing negative about your story. ;)

Please update as soon as you can so I can litter your reviews. ~LB
Narnian magic
2008-08-20
ch 15,
abuseWOO-HOO!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!
UPDATE. or else.
LULU'S DOLLS WILL COME AND KILL YOU! =)
Feneris
2008-07-19
ch 14,
abuseI like the twist at the end, with the revalation that Lynwood is actually Auron.
Kintora
2008-05-27
ch 15,
abuseI'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. I've been a mess of stress and boiled brains lately, especially since the school year is almost over. But after finding some precious time to look over a few of my favorite stories, I was able to catch up on this one. and I must say, I am impressed as always by your work. The characters are slightly ooc, but in a very believable way.

I can't wait until the next chapter. Maybe it's because I'm worried about what's going to happen to Tidus and Yuna, and curious as to what Rikku and Auron's purposes in SIN really are. Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to the rest.
Nightz Rain
2008-05-08
ch 15, anon.
abuseAbsolutely love it. I haven't been on forever and I just got bored and happened upon this story. Please continue. Can't wait to read more.
Silver Phoenix 117
2008-05-08
ch 15,
abuseWow! I cannot believe how quickly this story captured my attention - I had been a big fan of "Behind the Mask" before you put that on a semi-permanent hold. Anyways, I'm glad you've picked this up. This kind've reminds me of the movie "Spy Game." Tidus and Yuna's relationship was a bit on the quick side in its development, but I definately can't deny that I liked it. ;-) I cannot wait for your next update!
A Loving Fist
2008-04-23
ch 15,
abuseAh, theres our favorite Kantana swinging old man. The only thing that I didn't like, is how he had his bottle of wisers in his desk drawer... desk drawers should be full of files, pens, elastic bands, paper clips, that kinda thing. Alcohol should be on shelves, or maybe inside of one of those open-able globe thingies.

Also it might me nice to see some of the action from Braska's viewpoint.
New lord of darkness
2008-04-19
ch 15,
abuseUPDATE!
You have me hooked on this, and i want to read more.
UPDATE!
Walks In The Shadows
2008-04-19
ch 15,
abuseA very interesting and original story. I haven't read many FFX stories, so I may be wrong, but I don't think there's another story out there where Tidus is a paid assassin that tried to kill Yuna's father but instead got amnesia and is now on the run from his employers, in the process falling in love with Yuna.

Looks like Rikku, at the very least, might be a double-agent, but I got a feeling that Auron probably is, too. This story is very good, very innovative. I can't find many mistakes in the plots or characters or anything. There probably are a couple of grammar or spelling mistakes, there almost always is, but I didn't see any. All in all, I like it- I hope you update soon!
lights-parade
2008-04-17
ch 15,
abuseLoved it. Keep up the good work ;)
digitalgirl89
2008-04-17
ch 15,
abuseluved the chapter. keep up the work and plz update soon
raindropsX
2008-04-17
ch 15,
abuseyeah Auron. great chapter.
Aimed mischief
2008-04-17
ch 15,
abuseWhoa. Nice update! ^_^ Love the suspense! :D
Seelenspiel
2008-03-24
ch 15,
abusesorry to hear about that, i hope someone made a copy :7 good luck on your exams though
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