Good so far.

Wow, that's stupid. You use certain words too many times. Try to change your words up maybe?

Idiot.

A very sweet story! But I don't think Leela woulda belived the note Zapp wrote.

It just gets better and better man your the best at this! You make all the right jokes at the right times LOL ^^
man write some more your still the best great job keep it going high!LOL :)

Native Boy

very funny i like this, i didn't think this kind of TV was here! thanks for the laugh! You are so on my fav list!

LOL this story is awesome! It's totally awesome, esp. when Bender saw Fry & Leela naked. :P

Glad to see more Zapp Brannigan stories. You should check out my "Non Fiction" Zapp Brannigan's Big Book of War keep up the good work...I got writers block lol.

My goodness, just how do you crank out so many good stories in such little time?
This is defintely my favorite fic of yours so far! Everyone was very in-character, particularly Zapp and Kif. And the Leela/Fry fluffers wasn't over-the-top at all, very nice. Kif's sighs were put in at great places, and Gord sighing with him was excellent... hehehe. DNA squirting. I love Bender. =p

-Audrey