Nuu you can't be uninspired, this is an awesome fic D:

Well, good luck with your studies and I hope your inspriration returns!

Poor Nami T__T
Sucky that you're uninspired for this fic, it's probably my fave on here... But I know how you feel...
Still, if you finished it that'd be cool!

~Smile!

Gah! I HATE LEXI AND CAITLIN SO MUCH! I WANT THEM TO DIE!

poor Namine...

Very nice, and worth the exercise, I'm sure. Well, the school year's almost over anyways, P.E. -can- be that bad.
Good luck, and I'm looking forward to your next update!
Oh, by the way, has a random person or two barged up to you and asked you to sign your scrapbook? If they do, please sign. They are very determined... ^^;; they'd most likely be my friends...

Aw, really...sad, dramatic, and lots of romance. That's why I love this story. Oops! I should've read your other story, but I will now. Update soon! I really love this story!

hmm...i dont have a wii...my cousin does...but i have no idea what it is...all i know is that i can play guitar hero on it and it FREKEN RULES! =P

so yeah...i rather you wait for your inspiration to come back than to just let it die...that is why More Than Just Friends? has not been updated for what...5 months now...sad but...

anyway... so yeah. i think it is good...i think i suggested some time...i think last review that Roxas could come visit her...or not.

which ever what ever... so yeah. update if you want. but you dont have to.

I still think it was a good chapter, i could really feel the emotion in it. :) like when she said she was not allowed to feel anything anymore...that was amazing.

so yeah, a chapter can still be good even if nothing exciting really happens.

so nice job! bye! :)

I can see where the lack on inspiration comes in...I didn't touch my Xenosaga fan fiction for months. But they decided to release the Xenosaga anime in the US and I'm working on it like mad at the moment. XD I also downloaded all the theme songs tot he episodes, so that also got me writing...

While putting a story in hold is acceptable,I don't think you should drop it. Would suggestions for what could happen next help at all? School and whatnot always take first priority, but over the summer I'm sure you could pick back up on it!

Ima, more suggestions after I read! *nose attatched to screen*

Aww, that was sad...it reminds me of the song I wrote back in December. I'll C&P it here:




“Teach me the definition of ‘strength’
I wonder if it means to carry out my original intention at any cost
Or does it mean to protect what I must even if it means laying down my life?”

Oshiete
Why can I be so decisive about some things,
But have all thoughts end in confusion when it comes to you?

Oshiete
I know where I stand
But could you tell me what’s outside my world?
Because we were more than six thousand dimensions apart
But now we’re not even in the same timeline
I haven’t heard your voice
Since forgetting the tone of our last goodbye

Oshiete
What’d you do to fix my thoughts upon your name?
It’s my own fault, in the end
But the distance doesn’t effect me like it did
I can still remember the happiness making you smile brings me
Even when I lose count of the weeks it’s been since I last felt it

Oshiete
How divert my thoughts from you and to reality?
Out of all the things that can never be,
It was doomed to be you and me
You’ve told me that so simply so many times
But your expression is so stoic when you do
When I do make you smile,
I long to hold onto the hope there’s something more in your eyes

Oshiete
Why does your presence fill me with peace?
And our time apart torments me with anxiety?
You’ve made it so simple
To accept reality with out pain
But pain completes every portion of my life

Tell me
How I can be so strong and decided,
Yet so broken and confused at the same time?

Oshiete
Who stands where?
Can a different emotion stand somewhere else?
That’s the only explanation I can see

Tell me…
Was that your shadow…
Passing by the window to my world?

Teach me the definition of ‘strength’
Is it to hold to my world and most precious hope,
Or learn how to say goodbye with a smile?


As you can guess, the title of the poem is Oshiete. I have another poem that I wrote more recently titled "In The Name" but it isn't my best and I don't have it on this computer at the moment. If you're interested, drop me a line and I'll send you more. ^-^

But as for suggestions, you could do some pretty dramatic scenes in the near future. I might wanna reread the rest of the story before making too many suggestions, but I do have a question...what happened to Kairi?

Anyway, good work on this chapter! Email me! I'd be happy to help you keep the story going. ^-^


Your friend,
Leigh
AKA The Final Hikari

ok im really really glad that my name is spelled differently that her's. i already told u my name waz caitlyn. plz plz update soon, it feels like foreva and i HATE waiting, not my best qulity i know but still. so plz update!

caitlin u fricken brat! ugh... i hate her and aunt lexi! srry... but update soon!

yay an update :)
EEK its okay
I've been going Bleach crazy XD
hahaha
we all have lives outside of KH!
hehe
well update soon!
when you get a chance :D

Yay! An update! Want to know my thought pattern when I saw that email? I was remembering the last chapter's events (though I did go back to do a little re-reading) and when I saw the title of the story in the email these are my thoughts word for word:

"Where Do I Stand? OY, CAITLIN! I DON'T GIVE A S#I! IF YOU THINK THE POEM IS PERFECT, YOU MISPELLED A WORD AND I WAS JUST BEING NICE GIVING YOU THREE POINTS OF PRAISE! *BEEP* YOU!"

XD Yeah, I avoid and loath the Caitlin I know to this day.

Good work on the chapter, Roksas! I've been neglecting my Xenosaga fan fiction for my Valkyrie Profile fan fiction and new Valkyrie Profile fan fiction (I'm posting it tonight).

And, should I remember properly, BOOER THE AUNT! XD :D

Update soon. ^-^ Drop me a line sometime, too! I've gotten a new email address and computer, so I am hot s#it on a silver platter. Later!



The Final Hikari

YEAH! and update...now only if i update mine then the world will be complete...well not really...but

anyway...ok that is fine, just tell her to take her time, i want it to be as pretty as possible.

ok...so this chapter is really good! :)

i reread chapter nine just to get the feel of the story again...and gosh i think it hurt more the second time than it did the first.
but i still think they made up rather quickly, but that is what people in LOVE do. yes i said it, since both of them are too...well some really good adjective to say it!

anyway back to THIS chapter...
omg Catlin and her mom so planned that, what evil little witches. Catlin was like, 'oh mom take Namine to the wedding instead of me, if we have some time alone without that stupid little girl in the way, then he will fall in love will me for sure.'
and the mom was all like 'oh a happy ending for my oh so wonderful amazing daughter, how can i not resist...but now i have to spend a whole week with that stupid brat...oh well gotta to go and tell her the 'wonderful' news and get it over with. Have a wonderful time boy hunting, dear, bye!" evil smiles all around.

how gross would that scene be, it made me sick to type it. AH! and you know what that mom makes me angry...but i have a really good friend who has the name Lexi...so she makes most of the pain go away...not all but most...

anyway so back to the cuteness of the story! WAY!
so they are finally going on a date...but due to the wonderfulness of this story...Catlin is probably going to crash it and on top of that Namine is going to have to tell Roxas that she is leaving...due to the fact that both her cousin and her aunt are evil and ganged up on her...but she does not know that yet.
you know...i really dont remember how old these cute kids are...but if they are like 17, even 16 maybe Roxas could fly up there himself...or since it takes so long...use the portals of darkness through the organization.

OR
oh! what is they get there and they finish with the wedding and Namine is like 'oh glad that is over with...even though she met a great friend...Selphie...anyway so she asks her aunt when they are going back home...and she is like 'ah, well i have not seen my family in such a long time, do you mind if we stay another TWO WEEKS!' and Namine trying to be a sweet girl and clear her name get well made but in a polite way...if that is still possible, so she tells Roxas the awful news...and he freaks...spends a whole week with Catlin has already pushed him too the edge literally...the clock tower...ok bad joke never mind, so he is like stay right there...and hangs up the phone.

so Namine is like wtf Roxas...but she trusts him...she tries to call back...but she cant...he wont pick up his phone.
and one day while is sitting on a rock on the wonderful beaches of Destiny Islands...that is where they are going...i sure hope so cause this scene would not work if they were going some place like Radiant Garden...anyway.
so she is sitting and drawing the sunset...and she whispers 'Roxas is miss you' and then he says, 'you dont have too...'
and she turns around at the shock of hearing his voice, and he smiles wide, '...because i am right here, with you, Namine.'
and with that they kiss.

aw.ww.ww.ww.ww! how cute right!
ok since this review is already long enough...i will stop, but anyway really good job, and i am glad you updated. BYE! :)

Nice, I was wondering if you were alright, with the not updating for a while...
Oh yeah, wasn't what the little kids wearing in the Christmas concest disturbing? Or did you not go?

great!

MUWAH! @_@" That was sorta sudden! @_@" please update soon! this is still one of my favorites. MUWAH ^^ O_o" Sorry, gotta say this, say this to all my favorite authors! @_@"

I LOVE YOU! XD sorry.