Reviews for Son of Pain, Earned in Full

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lisab1986 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was fantastic. Argos hopping into the tub at the end made me cry, it was so sweet... this was really well written, and I loved it! Thanks!
Amanda Hawthorn 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI'm trying to think how I possibly missed this the first time around. I just found this on YTDAW searching for a fic thread and I thought I'd read all of your work. That being said, this is just heartbreakingly beautiful. You write angst so well and never fail to bring tears to my eyes. Thank you as always, not for making me cry, but for delivering some of the most powerfully beautiful GSR stories ever written.
jenstog 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abusei feel a little depressed now! but I envy your eloquent writing skills
SoS5-16 2007-08-20 ch 1,	abuseangst you said.. Angst... sad and moving as it was, oh wow, its one of the best GSR pieces I ever read. Good job.. :D
elfling65 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abuseWow! Sobbing here... Absolutely amazing.
Just Thinking 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThis says it all: "Why now?" so many times, and in her head his answer was always along the lines of, "I just didn’t want to be alone anymore." So many fics use this as a good thing and it really isn't. I'm sure this is a real fear, she's afraid of being the alternative to nothingness. This is really good, but you were right: a downer. You did an excellent job of getting her emotions across. Her desperation at holding on to herself was heartbreaking. I'm glad he fianally came throgh in the end, hopefully he learns not to take her for granted anymore.
spongebob 2007-06-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. I think this line spoke volumes: As she had packed her treasures into a box he neatly labeled “STORAGE," Painful but oh so beautiful.
QueenKate 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseThat was a great story. I definately cried. I am a wuss but this story is wonderful! ~kate
bellabug 2007-06-08 ch 1,	abuseI'm not usually a fan of angst when it doesn't come with an inbuilt happy ending, but this was just so very well written. Brilliant, really. Congratulations! Rach.
Beuller 2007-06-08 ch 1,	abuseAboslutely, achinging gorgeous.
angsty-otaku 2007-06-06 ch 1,	abuseWonderful story, very detailed and tearful and beautiful.
hope-passion 2007-06-05 ch 1,	abusehm... my mind is blank that was really good. I love how the team all changed and Nick wanted to trade stories with her. Yup, good good good :)
Forensic Nurse 2007-06-04 ch 1,	abuseAs hard as it was to read this, I am glad that I did. This story was so beautifully sad. I felt everything Sara was feeling with her. I loved the ending where she realizes the tables have turned & now it's Grissom who is desperate to have her love. Great job! I can't wait to read more from you.
smokeinmirror 2007-06-02 ch 1,	abuseI don't believe I've ever gotten so emotional over a fic. It's so heart wrenching and painful to read but yet so realistic and believable. I think TPTB should have you write for the show so we can have some realistic angst without having to drag Lady "You-Know-Who" back on the show to create stupid tension. Now I could only pray that Sara would survive, because there's so much potential for another season of good character development.
Lesley 2007-06-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseArgh, so, so sad. You almost made me cry. And stories never, ever make me cry. It was great how you took a totally different view of their relationship, rather than it being so happy and sweet throughout the season and then ending in tragedy, I loved that the serial killer was just one more bump in the road and it took something else to get them out of it. Good job.

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