You know what you remind me of? Lieyan, that's who... the authors on FF and FP that are hugely under appreciated for more 'abstract' writing styles that average Joes avoid. I wouldn't be surprised if you had more published on FP. Both of you have disturbing tendencies to ignore conventional capitalization. -sigh- Too good, neh?

"my left foot was named Buoyancy
and yours was named Cynicism."

So true, so true...

"your left foot still feels alien to me."

...

Marui sounds strikingly mature in this fic, maybe because it's actually a poem, hm, that's new... Well, it's a side of him you don't see very often.

So disturbing and random that I pray for your sanity, but then again greatness is just an euphemism for complete lunacy... XXD

j'ai rein? You have queen?

Is that it?

Anywasy, love the poem.