Will you update soon? Pleasesesesesesese?

Yeah..I don't thik I understood my comment either...I was wanting to be like Tobi..and I have this thing with people having heat strokes..so I wanted to know if you would make one of the characters have a heat stroke 'cause it would be awesome to me. ^.^' Sorry for the confussion!!

OH OH! Hitan thinks this story is good! But somethign really cool..Hitan can't get past a character hopefully having an heat attack thingy..like if your to hot you fall to the ground and start squirming crazily and stuff...Hitan is in the middle of trying to make a nice story but Hitans story will have a character having that kinda attack! But it would be kinda cool if you made Misaki-chan have an whatever attack!

so short T_T but rainbowy leader pwnz all. xD and they're finally formally introduced! and tobi is so awesome and luffable! yay! update soon harly

It's been /way/ too long since you updated! But anyways... nice chapter. Sorta short, but it was good.

Update soon!

THis is awesome! I love the last part it was funny! Update Soon! ^.^

Do keep writing this story.
it's a good one for a change.

i love it especially this part.
“Want to go train?”

“Can we use Tobi as target practice, un?”

“What’d he do this time?”
that just funny.

Nice chapter! Definitely not going in a direction of a Mary-sue... and these chapters are really good, to boot! I admit I hardly read OC's, but it's looking realistic so far, and I'm looking forward to the rest! ^_^

Oohh... This looks really good!! Keep it comin'! :)

I love it. This is one of the few DeixOC stories that I've read that actually gain my attention. The beginning was good and I like how the character seems unsure of herself and afraid. It gives the story more sense of reality if you get what I'm saying. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. ja ne.

Good chapter; ah, it's so refreshing to read an OC story that is neither OOC nor Mary-Sue. I suppose I have you to thank for that, of course. Looking forward to another chapter. Keep up the good work.

I love your story Harely-Harely :3

Pretty good start. I usually see OC stories and gasp with horror because they are, 99 times out of 100, horribly awful. However, this seems to have potential - avoid Mary Sue and OOC and I think you could prove that anti-OC stereotype wrong!

I'll be looking for a new update soon-

Good luck

TK

its really good please update nya