*sigh* STUPID heiji~
i hope he finally realizes he loves kazuha soon
AwEsOmE story~ poor conan

That was hilarious. And I could totally see Shinichi/Conan at the end there.

You are a genius!
~ Y

Hahaha, this is awesome!

Bravo! Standing ovation! XD As much as I like Heiji's thoughts on Kazuha that absolutely pulled at my heartstrings, I just love the perfectly IC ending with him and lil' Conan-kun. Plus, "I'm too old for this" just puts the cherry on top of this light-hearted sundae~

Shinichi's line made my laugh so hard I almost fell from my chair XD
Heiji is so cute when he is clueless! :D

This is so good! Brilliant! Wonderful!! I mean, I really like the way you described the Heiji/Kazuha episodes and the way Heiji's thoughts raced through his mind. It may lack a plot of sorts, but I found it really engaging to read! The title is so apt; it fits the short story perfectly. ^^ Do I talk too much? Hope you don't mind.

Btw, if you had the time please take a look at my HxK fanfic entitled 'Humoresque'. I'd appreciate your opinion on it. (=

What I disliked in this story were phrases like "sweatdropped" and such. Sorry, but those are things that can be used in anime or manga, but not in a story (at least, not like that, IMO).

What I liked: the humour in it (I heart jokes and stuff)

What I really appreciated: your attention to correct spelling. If there's one thing that's a turn-off in fanfics, it's bad spelling TYVM for paying attention to that...

That's just so Heiji. ^^

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. This fic brightened my day. Nicely written, loved Hattori's reaction to Shinichi's attempt to help at the end.

HEE. Made me laugh. ^.^

I LOVED IT

Wow, this was awesome! I really loved every part of it, his feelings are so well described! I think the cutest thing is that "he would turn the planet upside down to find her" wow! Heiji and Kazuha are the BEST! Very good job!
One thing, Heiji is the detective of the West, not of the East^^

Wow,that was so funny,the fact that everything you typed here is true! The last part's really funny,I really liked Conan's reaction when Heiji laughed!

I love it^^

It's been awhile since you last wrote dc fanfic! A nice Heiji/Kazuha fanfic, especially Heiji, you've written so well!
hope to read more hk fanfic from you soon!