for a moment i thought they were fighting

O/.\O!! Thats da first Sonic/Shadow fic I've ever read, and it was very good!! Now that I think of it, The only people I would ever pair shdow with are Sonic, or my OC, and maybe rouge, but I prefer the others. Anyway, beautifully written story,very impressed!!^/-\^

so cute... but please more love more love please lets give them more love... i just love this fanfic, but more love

cute

I loved it!

yay, sonadow fluff!^^ very cute. :)
the only things i´d have to say about that...you have some really majorly odd sentence conctructions in there. like...

"Sonic's eyes shown the pesky lime-green, grinning for the support of the other hedgehog's hand."

come again?

it should be "were a" instead of "shown the" and your sentence makes it sound like the eyes (subject of the sentecne) were grinning...@.@ rephrase it like, "Sonic´s eyes were a pesky lime-green, yet he grinned upon seeing the other´s hand, offering him support." or something. there´s more like that in there, and some typos.

i *loved* the playfight and the dialogue was good too. only critique content-wise would be that you fell in the usual yaoi-writer´s trap of them being all over each other all of a sudden instead of just hinting in a subtle way or letting feelings develop slowly if this was an actual fic and not a one-shot. i think this would be better if you maybe had one tentative kiss at the end and just some playful flirting and fighting beforehand. shadow ta least should be heavily in denial. :) anyway, nice work!