O, awesome new story! I've just read both chapters and am imensely enjoying it, can't wait for the third chapter!

Tahra

Sam shook his head, “Being glib about a plan doesn’t actually make it more likely to go right.”

“I’m not being glib,” Dean defended himself. “I’m being cocky. Big difference. Being cocky means I have years of experience of pulling little brother’s ass out of trouble to back me up.”

Actually snorted over these lines.

And this line I just loved:

The good ones go and the bad ones are taken away. Unless the good ones aren’t so good and get them back.

Yeah! Good fic being posted. Uh-oh. Dean seems to be in trouble :)

Tidia

ohh snap! awesome twist

I'm loving the story so far but then again I always love your stories.

I'm a little concerned about the warning of character deaths, my mental health can't handle dead Winchesters so if you plan on killing them off than please send me a warning...therapy can be so expensive.

You do such an amazing job writing the boys and I love what you're doing with Sam's freaky visions.

Cookies for you, update soon!

I'm here, I'm intrigued, but I'm worried...character death? As in permanent character death? Or character death as in AHBL, ding dong Sammy's "dead?" I'm trusting you! :-)

The breakfast scene - awesome (even if I did have to Google 'battle of the Somme'). (c:

But this lines was my fav...

“Wuh? H. Leave the cabbages,” Dean mumbled as the remnants of whatever bizarre dream concocted in his mind faded away.

Dean has some crazy dreams!

awesome story so far.

great start.. keep it up...

Interesting start, though I must admit when I read multiple character deaths I was a bit dubious as I don't like Sam/Dean death fics, so I'm hoping you mean other characters! That I can cope with!

Something us obviously up with Sam and his visions and it won't be long before Dean tries to force him to reveal all! Plus Dean is all gung-ho about this coven hunt! And the motel girl is the high priestess daughter!

Priceless, typical Dean behaviour in the diner, that and the massacre he made of his breakfast, no wonder Sam was nauseous!

God, this is a fabulous start to what I'm assuming will be a helluva story! I laughed hysterically at both the description of the boys' lovely motel room and the breakfast fiasco. In fact, I'm still laughing. Just wonderfully humorous pictures.

Ah, but all is not funny. Really liked how you set the stage for a very serious hunt. Your last line is the kicker. Now, will Sam come clean? Looking forward to the ride. Until next time...