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| happyharper13 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Incredibly creepy, but very interesting. Well-written (as usual for a WitchGirl fic) and really impressive detail. You provided really amazing insight into Natalie's character, better than I've ever seen done. |
| Immokk 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseVery creepy. At times she seems almost- rational. But she soon descends and you write her madness very well. 'Christopher and Chloe, no room for little Natalie, no no, tomorrow sweetheart' Very good, very strange and perfect for her charatcer. |
| CSIvHP11 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseit was good but creepy at the same time it sent shivers down my spine |
| NoDakGrl 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting read. You had a real insight on Natalie. Great job!It would be great to see your take on each of her victims. To get the other story. |
| The Queen of Sin 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusewow, ok that was kinda wierd but good, I've only watched a couple of clips from living doll a here in the UK we're on lab rats but this seems like natalie. :D excellent writing! |
| devilssmile666 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...just a little weird, but great job with it. |
| superCSIgsryoblingfan5875 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseall i have to say is...kreepy! |
| PisceanPal23 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty morbid...but maybe that's where I've been reading Pride and Prejudice, haha...seriously, that was a vivid piece of work, it's whetted my appetite of true CSI for a bit...but I still maintain I'll go insane by the time the season opener comes on...gah! EVIL CLIFFHANGER! Awesome job, fantastically twisted, it's details were awesome, exactly what I expect from Natalie! |
| necira 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abusegood job getting into Natalie's head, very creepy in there |
| WuHaoNi 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseOoh. Freaky. Very good, though...I'm impressed by the way you got inside her mind. Excellent. |
| Libby 2007-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. It's scary how easily you were able to get into Natalie's head. I really liked it. I tend to write the same way, using lots of sentence fragments. The fragments represent the way people think, especially crazy Natalie. Wonderful job. |