really good`1!~!
You potrayed the owner so precisely! I love this~!

I love and adore this story~ It's the most thoughtful and OC PSoH fanfic I've read yet!

That was brilliant. I liked this simile best, though: 'Hastily, he tore at Leon's jeans, much as he might with a particularly complicated bakery box.'

It illustrates D so well.

And I love how D is cold and yet starting to realise that he is missing something by being so ethereal. This is a great short story.

I love this couple!
Excelent onsehot!
Kisses from Argentina!

That was incredibly deep. And so very well written, I enjoyed every second. Except those times when D was being an **, lol. I litterally screamed, "D, you're being a retard!" >< But it was all good by the end. Being a kami is one thing. You're powerful. All knowing. Smart. But perhaps not smart enough. You learn more by being in someone else's shoes. And I think D learned a very important lesson here. On how to be human. If D could stay what he is, and yet have the capacity to feel human emotions, he could blow everyone out of the water. Humans, animals, and nature spirits alike.

this was fantastically done! I love D's confused approach into emotions via sex and the fact that you can clearly read Leon's thought processes without them actually ever being said

NO
it can't be over yet... can it?
i don't want it to be...
so plez write more??>_

I love this story! The characters are very in-character, especially D, which is hard to find in fanfiction. And I don't think I'm going to be able to read any Petshop of Horrors fanfiction now that goes anywhere below the waist, because the hermaphrodite thing was very believeable.

This was a really good and yummy story! I enjoyed it alot!

interesting. i like it! and the title makes sense now too. cool, nice story!

This was greath!

An absolutely brilliant history! Thanks