love it~
nice one-shot!

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So ccute!~~ But, I prefer the name 'Lenalee', over 'Rinali'.

AMEN TO THAT, BABE.
ALLENA FTW.

i lol at this fic.
i adore it's idea.
keep going at it~

Lol! Write some more Linalee x Allen! Plz!

An awesome one-shot!! I simply love it!! Allen and Rinali definitely have feelings for each other and they are just so sweet a couple!! =)

lol.. that was SO cute and funny.. and I too noticed that there are hardly any fics of Allen and Lennalee.. I hope you make lots more.. ^^

Hahahahahaha! That was so cute! I love how everyone assumed *that*. Poor Rinali and Allen. But they are so cute together as a couple.

hahahaha I love this! It's so perfect. Although, how many D.Gray-man chapters have you read exactly I'm afraid that it doesn't seem too accurate unless of course you didn't care which is fine. I must say I love fics like this because they're so much fun to read.
A Fan of Lavi! always
~KaitoAngel

that was really good, thanks a lot for this! it was super sweet too! just one piece of criticism, in the beginning, the speech, it's just that the way they were talking didn't seem very fluent, it kinda seemed 'translated', i think they would have talked in a slightly more relaxed/informal manner, other than that, it was really great!

that was great XD good job, i have to completely agree with you on the whole conclusions thing ^^

This is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Allen and Lenalee forever.

this is very good ending was funny

That was cute! ^__^
Haha, honestly I agree with you when people jump to conclusions but in here, it fit perfectly in. I guess, somewhat, that you've made me want to update my Allen/Lenalee fic XD
= 3 Lovely Job~