You faded older Gary out!
I liked him!
This was an awsome story, just like all your other fics, or...at least all the ones I've read.
*smiles sheepishly*
See ya!

Yay. Good, as usual.

Oh my God, I am soooooo sorry! I just read your story "Birds of a Feather Part 1". I AM SOOOOO SORRY! I swear I have never heard of your stories until now! Well, I guess you want me to delete it. Again, I'm so sorry this is absoulutly humiliating. :*(

ARTI...IS...PREGNANT...WITH...A...BABY OF A...FREAK... WHO... RAPED...HER!AND SHE KEPT IT! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

I'm gonna kill you...

Pika! I've read most of your stuff because Freakachu told me to, and it rocks! You're such a great writer, even though you do make some spelling mistakes. You have an excellent imagination, man! You rule! Oh, but I'd also like to say that Freakachu rules, too! She is one of the coolest Canadians ever. Lilja for Premier! PIKACHUUU!

Intruiging...

KEWL! I loved it!

Well, this story started out great-I love the premise, the idea of the human/Pokémon hybrids, and then Gary's in it too!-but it moved too fast, and Arti was extremely annoying to the point I'd call her a Mary Sue character (anyone who doesn't know what that is, don't worry about it). She was just _too_ perfect... all the guys were fighting over her, and she was related to/buddies with all of the Elite Four, and she could understand Pokémon speech, and she had a special bond with the Legendary Birds, and she was a computer expert, and all the characters were concerned about her and not a lot else... aheh. I could probably go on. o_O;; Anyway, not trying to hurt your feelings or anything... it was a good story, but not nearly as good as I think it could have been.