i loved this poem. and YES! PLEAASE DO DO the forbidden love thing! )

I really liked it. Snape's lines didn't make him too OOC like you see in a lot of these poems.

This is really, really great. I enjoyed it a lot! :)

oh i love this poem! its very clever, and i can just imagine it being said, in the darkness of the potions clasroom, as they meet in the middle and song... gah, now ive got a story idea!

DAMM U dani!

My reactions: Ew, ew, ew, ew, ooh! Aww, Sevvie! :-)

I really liked Sev's lines. There was a bit of competition, clingyness... Very sweet way to portray him.

I'm not so sure about the poetry of it, but I think it came of as very sweet. It seemed so unambiguous and to the point, then Sev buts in to say his little bit and gives a bit more meaning to it... I also like how he seems to be thinking more about the future.

Cute! :-)

Sylvia Snape

it's pretty darn good ya know!

Don't put yourself down. Your poem in it's simplicity reveals more than some of the work ohers have written and been lauded over. I hate poetry as a rule - I loved this one.

Interesting... no offense, but stories, not poetry are your stronger point! It was still good though.

you're not a horrible poet. I liked it, it was sweet beautifully written.

Beautiful.