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| blaaah92 2008-10-02 ch 5,  | abuseThis is amazing, I really like the story. Hope you post a new chapter soon, and... Harry doesn't REALLY look similar to a house elf, right? Just an insult to him since he is short and doesn't have 'pure' blood? |
| jogger 2008-08-17 ch 5, | abuseWhat a wonderful fic! I hope you intend to finish this! Your characterization of Sirius, as an intelligent person. JK said he and James were the cleverest in their year, and yet in "fannon", h is frequently written as an idiot... I love the sweet interaction between Harry and his Godfather! Thankyou for a great story! Please update! |
| Isebella 2008-04-05 ch 5, | abuseAwesome stroy and Siruis is very relistic, and the relationship with Orion and Siruis' childhood is amazing up date soon. |
| Lils 2008-03-11 ch 5, | abuseGreat story. The title pulled me in immediately. It was like Spring Awakening Gilmore Girls Harry Potter. How fabulous! But with less of the Spring Awakening elements, only in the title really. Anyway, great job. I really like this story. The only thing I would suggest is to try not to rely on Gilmore Girls so much for the dialogue and the plot. And that's it. Keep up the good work! |
| QueenoftheFlyingMonkeys 2008-02-23 ch 5, | abuseI love where this is going. It's so different from others stories I've read and I can't wait to see what comes next! |
| CelticGirl264 2008-02-23 ch 5, | abuseI was watching Gilmore Girls the other day and all the sudden I thought of your story and decided to see if you updated. I was pleased to see you had and now I cannot wait until the next chapter. Hope to see another update soon. |
| mervoparkite 2008-02-09 ch 5, | abuseHi! I just found your story and read all five chapters. I'm really enjoying it. I'm quite intrigued by Orion and I think I could grow to like the guy. He obviously doesn't have a clue about Sirius and Harry's life, but for some reason he wants to be a part of it. I ALMOST wanted to smack Sirius for the cafe conversation with Orion. Obviously Sirius doesn't trust his father at this point, but that was just rude--even if Harry wouldn't have wanted to do that there must have been a better way for Sirius to handle the situation. Looking forward to your next update. |
| suekosa 2008-02-06 ch 5, | abuseI liked the end bit where sirius checked harry's temprature. I think you should make Harry have seizures on a frequent basis, that would make it very interesting |
| Bluebear13 2008-01-23 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great story! Keep up the good work! |
| boycrazy30008 2008-01-21 ch 5, | abusei love this story update soon |
| helbaffy 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI realy like this story! Please, PLEASE update ASAP! :) |
| vincents1lover 2008-01-18 ch 5, | abuseaww u make them so adorable! |
| vincents1lover 2008-01-18 ch 4, | abuse"i didn't know hells angels were in town' "thats it, i' bringing the baby pictures!" "no! Sorry!I love hells angels! Hells angels rock!" lOL OMG I LVOE IT! |
| babyface 2008-01-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseLovely and cute as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| vincents1lover 2008-01-18 ch 3, | abuseOMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH!! |