D: poor Sakura. Really well written.

interesting and well written. never seen one quite like it, and i like that its not sugar coated.

I really liked Sakura's POV in this, lonely and worried. It was sad and appropriate. Faved.

Hello. I've kinda gone off Sayaoron (a lot btw) due to the whole eyeball thing (ew ::cringes::) and I'm not a huge fan of yaoi or KuroFai but I rather like this fic. You express Sakura's worry, anxiety, thoughts & feelings quite well. A small insight into her and Fai's relationship is offered and it's quite intense. The line where Fai attempts to quell Sakura's worry is particularly memorable, his attempt to be light-hearted very characteristic indeed.

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

I love this. It's so sad, yet so appropriate for the manga. Sakura is such a sweet-heart, and she's always so sad!

Woah, that was sad. The end flowed nicely.

..
awe
honestly
this is very sweet.
makes me remeber the good old days before .. well.
yea
its strange how quickly trc's atmosphere completely changed starting wtih the events of acid tokyo..
b ut that's clamp for you
well.. it's an interesting perspective on what sakura could have been feeling at that point.

"Her tea is cold."

Amazing ending line. The whole story is beautiful, with the ever-observant-but-often-not-comprehending Sakura and poor concerned Kurogane. Fai's attempts at lightheartedness were very well done as well.

-AOPT

You're one of my favourite writers for .hack, so I had to check this out. It's so lovely and well-written. A very nice mix of sweetness and sourness, just enough of each so that it's not entirely depressing or overbearingly fluffy. Good work, as expected. ;D

awsome! Great discription, great emotion and just all around great! I really love the part about Kurogane locking the door, (faved)