DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY! its so good! i need 2 know what happens...so update REALLY soon!

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This story is amazing! You are a very talented writer! PLEASE don't give up on the story! (Thats the worst thing in the whole world!) You have a great story plot...just enough to leave you insainly curious!

Ouch! poor kurorin! Please continue I want to know what happens!

this story is really intriging. i love it ^_^

e!I love this story already, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Is Fye the phoenix? That'd be so cool... ^_^ I imagine the scene now. I can't wait! Update soon!

-SKF

This is so good! Continuation yes?

Please do continue this story! It seems pretty interesting so far! I can't wait to find out what will happen to Kuro, and why Fay is not allowed to see anybody. ^^

ack! i hope Kruogane doesn't get it to bad! 'Miro tattled to mummy' that was funny, i like your humor. can't contain myself, waiting for the next chapter, it does get so boring around here sometimes... =3

Great Story! Please update soon!

Oh no! Poor Kurogane...

I love your writing style - unlike a lot of fanfic writers, your spelling and grammar are very good. Not to mention, this story is a real pleasure to read. I hope you're going to write another, 'cause I really want to know what happens... :)

Great story telling! And Ashura is so evil to force fay to hurt Kurogane! What will be Kurogane's punishment!? I feel both worried and eager to know that (I am sorry if I sound like a saddist!). And I like the way you describe Fay's feeling of helpless and mild guilt towards Kurogane's torture. Not too much but just the right amount. Really looking forward to the next chapter!

I really like it cant wait 4 the rest

Oh~ It's so pretty! This is really interesting, and original. For all that there have been fics in the general area of this one before none of them were done quite this way. It looks like it's going to be a long haul, though.

Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this story! It's on my author's alert list for now, as only completed fics make it to my favorites list usually. :)

owie! there aren't that many kurocentric fics out there and i'm glad that i found one! ^^ brings a tear to my eye. i really really hope you update really really soon. pwease no da?