|Reviews for Complications|
| lactvoodle 6/8/12 . chapter 25
Combining both the mistical and the human.
And turn it into the dvine.
| lactvoodle 6/8/12 . chapter 22
| lactvoodle 6/7/12 . chapter 14
Very nice story.
| dewdrops and crowns 10/3/11 . chapter 25
One of my favourite BowserxPeach stories EVER. You wrote everyone so well and the ending was perfect too.
xx PG 1997 xx
| Elemental Queen 8/16/11 . chapter 25
That was an awesome story!
| ZADRookie 6/16/11 . chapter 25
Hurray! I give this lovely masterpiece 6 star out of 5! (LOL).
Thanks for such a great story... it was filled with: laughter, suspense, intrigue, a bit of "drama", fun and most importantly: a plot!
I was away for a long time (I think I just read until chap 18 before I disapeared fron ) but I'm glad it is complete.
Keep up the good work!
P. S. Say Razzi I said "Hi!" (I may go to read CoH right now *snickers*)
| DarkLillyOfTheNight96 5/27/09 . chapter 25
A very good story if you can please write more with this paring can't wait...Loved this story thank you for writing
| RockSuperstar 6/24/08 . chapter 25
how amazing! this is really well written and perfect-like. i love the entire story so... excellent job! :)
| Walkazo 6/8/08 . chapter 25
Figures it'd end just when my computer regains the ability to support this site! But it was a very good ending, nevertheless.
I love how Peach couldn't live in the limbo between friendship and a relationship with Mario: I can TOTALLY empathize with her! And the part when Bowser had issues with the ladder reminded me of how he'd wiggle his arms and say "Can't climb this" in Super Paper Mario when the player tried to get him to climb! I love making him do that!
Now the critisizm... there were a few typos: you replaced Larry with Iggy when Peach was waking up the Koopalings, and you switched from "Kammy" to "Kami" in the later chapters, but those were the only things that really stood out for me.
Anyway, I can't wait to read your next story! Keep up the excellent work!
| ebtwisty9 6/7/08 . chapter 25
Nice work, Mikari. C: (my last review was eaten and I was too upset to rewrite it, apologies!)
I'll miss this story, I can gaurantee. I already look forward to your next story, missy, so don't slack off. :P Nice closing...I really like your characterization of Grandpa Mush- I read that name and thought "huh, that's EXACTLY who he seems like!" I like it better than The Mushroom King, too. Fits him.
Anyway, nice work. Like I've said, I expected the BxP sections to be much longer, but they were still lovely. Superb work with the koopalings.
I'll miss Complications, but make sure you let me know what's coming up asap! I fully expect an advantage over your other readers, even if I don't get the honor of beta-ing next one! -mwahaha- ;) (or, y'know, not.)
Keep it up, dear. And good job and good conclusion.
| James Birdsong 6/7/08 . chapter 25
| up all nite 6/6/08 . chapter 25
It's sad that the story is over, but it was really great! And I'm happy that Bowser and Peach got together, and the kiss in the end is SO CUTE! Awesome story, you really did an amazing job!_
| up all nite 6/6/08 . chapter 24
Aw, that's adorable!
| mariosonic 6/6/08 . chapter 25
(Though I do think that Bowser gained 'Grandpa Mush's' approval to quick but I guess it had to be done in order for it to be just twenty-five chapters.)
| ebtwisty9 6/3/08 . chapter 24
Lovely character work...very believable scene. This one didn't seem too fast at all. C:
oh next chapter should be very, very good. I am very, very excited.