Oh, shock ending! Can't wait for more of this series, as always.

Well...gee wiz you didn't have to make me cry! God my mom's looking at me like a nut case but that was honestly one of the best written things I've ever seen on this sight.

Hehe :)
Sad that is, until you find out he was bluffing. But he does get his in the end yeah? Now THAT one really was sad though.

Aw. I can't say I was the biggest Norrington fan, but that was a incredibly sad scene :(

Haha. Finally some happier times. And nice to see things come full cirle. Ah, good times!

Uhhg! Don't you just hate when NOTHING goes right?

i love your story u rock...oh my name is Robin too! LOL UPDATE!

Very interesting take. Eh, sounds believable to me :D

Yeah, I like the kid and all, but leave it to ol' Will findle things up a bit here and there. *sighs* Boys.

Yikes...lots of drama. I'm getting quite scared myself :(

Funny, usually when the light bulb goes on in somebody's head it's a humorous situation...drowing to death is not so funny :D

He better move quick.

Uh oh. LOL. Looks as if maybe Jack is in a b it of trouble now too? :D
Oh man! He's really gonna get it later I gather. Oh I simply can't wait!

Oh, someone's in trouble. And he definitely ain't gettibng no lovin' tonight, that's for sure! Oh c'mon Erindi, have a little pity on the old block eh? :D

Oh, a plot-twist? Like it!
And please, give that cute, poor Norrie a little bit love, do you?

Whoa. Talk about plot twist! Oh dear, ha, this is not going good is it? Poor Jack is going to have a lot of explaining to do.

Love how protective Aragorn is over Will because of Legolas, that's so sweet. Got me a bit teary if I'm gonna be honest.