I really wish you'd take this one all the way.

Great story!

We see so many Evil Dumbledore plots because a lot of people like them. Twin of the BWL is my favorite kind, though. He's most often manipulative in those. I didn't think there was a way to counter memory charms, but anything is possible in fiction.

this is good, but although you have it marked as completed it really needs more. i would like to know if there were any other times that dumbledore removed harry and/or tonks memories and if he's removed memories of anyone else. i really would like to know what happens when the auror's show up and arrest him.

You know, I can't but feel just a bit sorry for Albus when Ameila gets a hold of him. And she doesn't give a rat's ass about "the greater good". I'd buy tickets to that fight! Thanks for sharing.

This story is NOT complete. You left everyone hanging. We have to see what happens to Dumbledore and find out the reactions of the professors when they learn that the old man attacked Tonks.

i disagree with the fact that you marked this story as complete, this is just a cliffhanger. please write more in this

A good start I hope you choose to continue this story at some point thanks and bye.

i like this one. be nice if you continued it. made it into a two shot or something.

great story

Interesting! Thanks for sharing.

It was a good plot.. Well done.. :)

Are you going to contine this story? It's to good to end there. I'd like to see Dumbles strung up by his thumbs, for what he did to Harry and Tonks.

well f*ck me. i love this. please do more soon.
karakot

Erk. {whine} You've marked it as complete, but you stopped too soon. What happened next?!? Can we have a sequel, pretty please? I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm