 Belle Mort 13 2009-08-19 . chapter 1well... that was depressing |
 SkoRn3d 2009-04-13 . chapter 1*sobs uncontrolably* |
 Emo Fox 2009-02-19 . chapter 1Awh. Super sad, but I enjoyed it.
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 NekoKriszty 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Holy. Crap.
Scary.
Freaky.
Awesome. |
 Kristine.D 2008-02-07 . chapter 1This makes me so dreadfully sad.
-Kristine X3- |
 : 2007-11-24 . chapter 1 This is so sad.
Honestly I love it, it is original in its own way.
Yet they are completely in character.
It's so touching, the way Naruto walked out and Sasuke just layed there unmoving and resistless.
But the last line actually made me genuinely sad, it almost brought tears to my eyes. I don't know what to say just that I'm touched by this and that it is a wonderful peice of writing.
I thank you for writing this, for once I'm not wishing for my time back on some over-done poorly writen story.
So again thank-you. |
 Ma Chat 2007-08-07 . chapter 1Such a beautiful piece. I absolutely adored everything about it- The way it flowed, the characters, the shallow melancholy of it all... It was truly a lovely story, and when I reached the end I had tears clinging to my eyes. -smile- Now, you go and update WWJD. I've been awaiting the next chapter for far too long, and reading this wonderful piece of fiction makes me crave it terribly. |
 CockroachX 2007-07-09 . chapter 1OH my god! That was so... SAD. I almost want to CRY. JEEZZ. You're so completely awesome at writing. I love all your stories. Please keep it up! Especially "What Would Jesus Do." I'm completely in love with your writing. I even did a little dance after reading this. A dance celebrating your excellent writing skills! =D |
 Fields of View 2007-07-08 . chapter 1*tears up* that makes me just want to cuddle Naruto and cry T__T but well done, I love the feelings and the tone of this shot.. the feelings got through very well, just loved it! |
 KinwaiForever626 2007-07-05 . chapter 1Oh! I think I'm about to cry. sad, but (this question is asked alot) what is going on? I like it anyways. |
 Chocobut 2007-07-02 . chapter 1I like the story but I have a few questions.
What actually happened to Sasuke? Was he hurt? Is it after the whole Orochimaru deal? What the heck is going on?
I do like this though. It's angsty and cute. (I see the yaoi. No need to squint.)
Hope you get your mojo back!! |
 Aarosha 2007-06-29 . chapter 1Kinda sad. But Sasuke never deserved Naruto in the first place. Akward since I love Sasunaru.
Hey, good news! ^w^ I finally got over that 'not liking yuri' thing. I actually do like it now. Not love it, just like it. As long as it's none explict, though. >.>
I hope our 2008 election picks a president who will FINALLY allow Gay Marriage. Because if they don't, I am so going to assasinate them... Shh, don't tell anybody I said that... |
 Animeaddict666 2007-06-25 . chapter 1*tear*
Geez. I think I just cried in my Cheerios. Fabulous though. Interesting perspective, but it was a bit unclear WHY he was lifeless. Drugs? Orochimaru's possession? Insanity? Still, I think not knowing worked just fine. Keep up the great work. |
 courageouscoward 2007-06-04 . chapter 1wai~ T-T so sad. |
 Secludedindarkness 2007-06-04 . chapter 1OMG it's soo good write on dude I'm itchin for another chapter! |