that was really depressing. u make neal sound like a jerk.

I LUV NEAL! NEAL IS EVERYTHING AWESOME AND FUNNY AND NICE AND

GREAT IN TP! HOW COULD YOU HATE HIM YOU SATAN SPAWN!

very sweet, very sad, very good, very heart-wrenching. great job!

Keziah

Wow. Very nice. I likes!

:oD

WOW.

For a song fic that you claim may suck, that was really good. And really deep.

Woah. That was good. Veeeery nice use of the song. Keep up the awesome work! YOu're going on my fave authors list. :)

SSSAAADDD!

*sniffle sniffle*

REALLY GOOD! WRITE MORE FAN FIc!

*Sniff*

that was pretty good! I luv ddas...

Well, normally i'm not that keen on songfics, but this is cool! I thought I was the only person in the world who liked that song!

Oh, my god! That was incredible. Very original, I loved it... That last line of narrative, 'Not since Cleon's death'... Ouch. That was almost a physical knock!

awww...intense. It's the perfect story...very original. I swear, this is the stuff stories are made from...

sad and depressing, with a sureal quality soutounding it. you've done what few authors can accomplish, suspend the reader into a different beleivable world of unreality. the story was simple yet hazy and slightly confusing (probably just b/c the chars were a tad OOC), so i felt like i was stepping into a dream myself when i read it. it's just so interesting and different...you deserve a trophy i think :) this was excellent, please write more stories like this one

Omigosh! that was... i love you so much! deep, man! omgosh, im gonna read that again.. geeze louis! i got it! i- i loved it! beautiful! purely brilliant! absolutely fabulous! BRAVO!

*madeline*

waaah! ::sobbing:: how horrid! that was sad! waaaaah! but i liked it...sad, but good. now go write a happi storee to make up for it! shoo!

Wow. Just...wow. I loved it, but would Neal really act that way? Or Kel? But it was REALLY good. :)

Awwww Sad sad sad