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| Anawey 2008-05-10 ch 8,  | abuseThis ending was anything BUT vague! I loved how sweet the end was, and really, I think the whole "You lied to!"/"Like I've never done that before" fits better in a situation like yours than in a fight scene. It seems more powerful this way. I loved this. |
| crazyzukofangirl1280 2008-05-10 ch 8, | abuse:D Hrm... If possible could you make your dream ending for this story a sequle? Happy Ending! |
| Anawey 2008-05-07 ch 7, | abuseOh, I hope nothing TOO bad happens in the last chapter. I like this, please get that next chapter up soon! |
| fourfourfourfour 2008-05-04 ch 7, | abusei, at least, didn't think iroh was ooc. this was a good cliffy, can't wait for moment iroh points his finger in zuko's face and shouts 'hahaha, i told you so!' :D |
| crazyzukofangirl1280 2008-05-04 ch 7, | abuse*gulp* |
| crazyzukofangirl1280 2008-04-19 ch 6, | abuseZuko turned his back...Iroh dissapered Azula'll say he was a coward... Then...then...then...I can't say it... |
| Anawey 2008-04-11 ch 6, | abuseWhat happens next? I sense a fight scene coming on! Update soon, please. |
| fourfourfourfour 2008-04-09 ch 6, | abusei was alittle worried when i read that iroh was ditching (except not really cause he's too nice for that) zuko and azula but hearing of upcoming iroh pwnage makes me feel much better :D update soon! |
| KnightRayne25 2008-04-09 ch 6, | abuseThank you for the update. I really like this story and love Iroh's inner termoil, it makes him more believable. |
| number1avatarfanatic 2008-04-08 ch 6, | abuseYay, pwning Iroh! Great chapter, keep it up! It's going on my C2 Archive!XD! |
| crazyzukofangirl1280 2008-03-21 ch 3, | abuseForeshadowing! |
| Anawey 2008-03-18 ch 5, | abuseGAH! No 'slip shod' ending!! I like this! Please, PLEASE continue. |
| KnightRayne25 2008-03-18 ch 5, | abuseI love this story and if you stop writing it I'll cry. Okay not really but I would be very disappointed all the same. |
| fourfourfourfour 2008-03-17 ch 5, | abusehurray an update XD loved the reference (i think that's what you would call it, but i'm not sure). Iroh should go shove azula overboard again, and drag zuko by his semi ponytale off that ship already!! please update soonish! |
| crazyzukofangirl1280 2008-03-17 ch 5, | abuseI've been waiting for this chapter! :) stupid Zuko! do you really trust Azula, the phyco, ove your uncle, who has done EVRYTHING for you? |