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| bbandgsr 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseaw i have the biggest smile right now! i loved this! |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful ... I love the traditional Grissom. He & Sara make such a well-balanced couple. |
| kaheels 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story. I love this intimate moment and how real it is. I can actually see the two of them having this conversation. It made me want to go stargazing, as well. I love the ending, so clever. |
| ayesha-s 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseoh beautiful, love it! |
| shania1277 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseSo beautiful, so sweet and well written:“I want to say yes. I promise. I want nothing more than permanence with you. I just want you to understand that you have me forever, whether we’re married or not.” and "She smiled, turning back to the night sky, thinking deeply about permanence." Thank you :-D |
| stvinny 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseJust a lovely bit of insight into their lives -- I can really see this conversation happening! Nicely paced, thoughtful and a unique point of view -- great story!! |