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Reviews For: The Gravity of Permanence

bbandgsr
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abuseaw i have the biggest smile right now! i loved this!
Forensic Nurse
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abuseReally beautiful ... I love the traditional Grissom. He & Sara make such a well-balanced couple.
kaheels
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story. I love this intimate moment and how real it is. I can actually see the two of them having this conversation. It made me want to go stargazing, as well. I love the ending, so clever.
ayesha-s
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseoh beautiful, love it!
shania1277
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseSo beautiful, so sweet and well written:“I want to say yes. I promise. I want nothing more than permanence with you. I just want you to understand that you have me forever, whether we’re married or not.” and "She smiled, turning back to the night sky, thinking deeply about permanence." Thank you :-D
stvinny
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseJust a lovely bit of insight into their lives -- I can really see this conversation happening! Nicely paced, thoughtful and a unique point of view -- great story!!
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