I love your writing style; angst is very effective ;)

**, needs a longer summary this story is to sentimental although i like the idea it is to sentimental!

God i even tear up when i read it! i saw the movie 3 times and cried every time. It's just so sad!! I hope there's a good twist in store.

after my friend and i went to see the movie we came up with the idea that Will could just stand in a bucket full of sea water to be with elizabeth (like Davy did during parly) I mean he couldn't stay there forever cause then he would be all tenticaly but it could def be a loop hole to the ten year rule :)...just thought id throw that out there.
update soon

His boot, technically. She was wearing his boot, and he needed it back.

it's really pretty, continue it please, but make it beliavable, i've started to read some post awe and are not well, "real"

i loved it
please update

I totally knew that about swans! Oh, that makes me feel smart.

So, I really like this fic, and I can't wait for the next update!

Ooh...

See, I didn't even want them to be together until this movie.

Great job!

Beautifully written! gah, I can't even write a review nicely, but you get the idea ;)
I didn't know swans mated for life! i did know about pigeons, though! thanks for the info! ;P

Yes, swans mate for life, but swans also won't hesitate to eat their young in times of hardship.


I love your prose: its so very elegant and appropriate. I'd hate be your beta: I would have nothing to say! I'd ask you keep this quality as opposed to longer length. Happy writing!

This is beautifully written! You have really captured the deep abiding love that Will and Elizabeth have for each other :D Update soon!

~Latebloomer

P.S. Welcome to HtR by the way!

HE CANT LEAVE FOR GOOD! IT WILL (HAHA) GO AGAINST EVERY THING I OWN/CAN BORROW/BUY!E&WTFOREVER!

AW!SOO SWEET!W&ET FOREVER!

First I want to thank you for running with this idea, because I too have trouble thinking Elizabeth is going to sit around/be Pirate King without attempting to see/save Will in ten long years. That said, I think you should see the movie again and check some of your dialogue attribution, and also... the boot that Will took off of Elizabeth was HIS boot :) Totally different implications. So, keep up the good work!

This is one amazing story! I'm enjoying every word, and I can't wait to see where you go with all this. Beautifully written, and I wait with bated breath for more! Hope you post it soon! :)

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See you around! Kudos to you for a phenomenal fic!

~Shaliza :)

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"Love is like war; easy to start, hard to end, and impossible to forget."

i like it keep going