Aww I love this! It's too cute. Simple plot, but extremely nice and well written. Though you did have a couple of typos towards the end of the story, probably around the last paragraph, but nothing serious no worries. But yes like others have said, it is very refreshing to see them as the females that they are. And you know, sappy isn't always a bad thing. :D Thanks for the addition to Seiya/Yaten, this put a smile on my face.

Good job (I wonder if Yaten will ever finish that song)
~Tenshi no Hoshii

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Aww, that was cute! It makes me happy to see that there are more of us that write Seiya/Yaten fics ^^

Very sappy but extremely cute!!^-^ Thanks for writing this! I don't find a lot of stuff that has the Starlights as girls so this is a refreshing change^-^

Great Job!

ToaR

love the pairing and especially like it that you kept both starlights female. After all in the show it was clearly pointed out that they were female and were just posing to be men. A pretty unclear reason though XD.

Yaten is, my favourite character of the three starlights to be honest. (She almost beat Makoto, has a cocky attitude and is simply cool XD) I never really liked Seiya, not because he tried to replace Mamoru (I mean, I wish him all luck with Usagi.. Mamoru is a dork) but I just...don't know.. he shouldn't have been with Michiru in that room! hehe..

Anyway, really enjoyed this story, you should try another one with this pairing... I surely like it a lot!

keep up the great work and I hope to see an update on your other stories too

~ Amnesia Nymph