this fic's amazing

Namine didn't truely live until Riku but it was far too late.

Good story.

Well, it didn't make me cry but it was very close. Which is annoying but it means you must have done a good job of writing the story. Nice work.

Oh. My. God. That was like the best story I have ever written on fanfiction. That story was too awesome for words. TOO awesome. Man, I feel so remorseful now. GREAT story.

I love this story right now. It's just the time period I like. With the whole men dominant over women, damsel in distress, princess, knight business. It's basically awesome.

The only critque (did I spell that right?) I have is when they both said they have fallen in love with each other. It's kinda corny. But I can't see how else you could have written it to make it fit there so I guess I know why you put it like that.

Okay, I've got the last part to read, but I can't now, so I'll get to it as soon as I can. DON'T TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS!

aw thanks for making me cry :P but no, this was amazing! GREAT job!

omgz i love it so far!

O_O;;

I'm always surprised when someone has the guts to kill main characters. Muh. ;_; Beautiful chapter. Your description of the action was fantastic and spectacular and could've been a high-quality movie with flashy special effects.

At least Sora and Kairi survived. And the way they did was really cool, too. Especially: “No! There’s no way you’re getting Kairi’s heart!” (I recently replayed KH and heard that so often - thanks to losing to Riku all the time - that it'll probably haunt me until I'm in a nursing home.)

And Roxas and Axel's squabbling when everything's falling down around their ears! ((: Amidst all the tragedy, that was really well placed.

Thanks for a good fanfic. 8D

I loved the last bit! And Kairi and Sora. Aw! _

Didn't manage to stay awake and read it in one go - though I did dream about it. (In a roundabout way.) There was a woman in a white dress lying in a little boat just big enough for her as it went through underground waterways. Then it floated into a room with gigantic iron doors, filled with machines made to kill the one who entered. The woman started hyperventilating because she wasn't ready to die, but the huge metallic doors shut and she screamed. I dunno where the waterways and the big doors came from, but your story obviously left an impression. I'm hoping Naminé is more fortunate. You won't kill her, will you? With all those keyblade wielders around she's got to be okay.

Thoroughly enjoying. _ I like the way I can see everything happening like in a movie. Axel and Roxas's squabbling is particularly vivid - and funny. (When Roxas isn't seriously considering to rip Axel's head off.)

Ohh, I like it! RikuxNaminé, who'd have thought? :D

Your writing's perfect. I didn't find one mistake, and I'm a nitpicker. o_o; It's very, very nice to read. One thing you could change is that you often refer to eyes being soft or hard: you could maybe describe more body language instead - not that there's any lack of that.

Looking forward to the rest. (So much for an early night. Why do good fanfics always appear when it's bedtime? XD)

Beautiful. So well written. God! They were so close... they were so close... Ironic. She was supposed to die, but he died to save her... then she killed herself. Sad. Very sad. But so beautifully done. I respect you so much for your work. Gorgeous, simply gorgeous.

. you made me cry. *sniffle* but you did a great job nonetheless.

wow, these are really long. I love it! i'm a little worried that eveyone will die in the next chapter though. I hope you didn't kill them. D:

anyways, you're such a wonderful author, i hope to see more of your writing soon. :)

Ha, I was right! :) About Kairi being the princess, that is - but I wasn't expecting so many people to die! :*( I think it was a very bittersweet, cute love story, and I truly wish that things could've worked and Namiku could've finally gotten their happy ending. Although that didn't happen, I think that the ending you chose worked very well. I also really liked how the last line tied in with the title/roses theme. I also liked how you touched on other romances within the story and delved deeply into all the characters' thoughts/feelings. It was a nice touch to make this story more real and moving - you did a great job *sigh* So sad...

OMFG! You just made me cry! Ah!

That was really sad. I felt really bad for Olette.

And Roxas! The angsty little blond! Poor him.

And wth? Kairi's the princess? Poor Namie!

Well, Kairi didn't know so can't really blame her.

But the ending was sad. They were burned!

Anyway, great story. Loved it and awesome job on this!

Good luck in the contest and best wishes!

[angie-chan]